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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Those lines are 100% mine. They are hard to stay away from, that’s it in a nutshell. There are so many great musicians out there, some bands even have followings, though they never got a record deal. It wasn’t wasted music some people loved it, that is making it in a way. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Tremendous work.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I’m a sucker for awesome lyrics, and these hit like a radioactive hurricane! Heheh
Great tempo with lots of energy!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adel. So glad you connected with the write my friend. One of my lines. lol. It’s nice to see you, hope all is well in your life. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian, I love this rhythm and flow LOL Don’t turn your back on her indeed.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I think that line was mine, it could have been, Joey’s. The verses are where I’m definite. lol. I was tired of these words sitting on a hard drive, so I did something about it. lol. A wise friend of mine once said “Work is meant to be shared, to be read and heard.” I might have paraphrased a bit. lol. Thank you, Fia. I think your influence has made me see that clearly. Always learning, I am. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Well done Damian.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Good to see you, and was also nice to get read some of your work again. Hope all is going well my brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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“she’s got eyes that mystify
makes you wanna take a chance
she’s the spider, yeah you’re the fly
caught up in a web of circumstance…”I’m totally feeling those lines right there. I will say, I’ve known a few dudes like this…might have dated a couple. This is a killer song, my friend!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. Unfortunately, I’m unable to talk about the song for a moment. But it will be resolved. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Incredible work, Fia. You’re one of a kind. :))))))
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Thank you, Tim ;))
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Kee up the good work Fia 💋
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Thank you, Backdeckbenny ;))
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Amazing work, Fia. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read Moremornin has found me vibratinat a frequency beyond fleshthe dream’s cliff still present in my cellsmy body pulsin with its beautythe euphoria moves like a livin thinggatherin power beneath my skinfloodin thru my chesttil I’m channelin somethin divinemy fingertips...
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You do have a way of keeping the reader in this series.
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appreciate it. it’s gotten me writin.
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Powerfully penned, Ambjr. Always dig the depth and layers in your work my friend. I’m really digging this series as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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really appreciate that Damian. means a lot.
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Fia Naturie and
Bobbington are now friends
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Read Moreyou gave me up as lost to the devilI let you go for much the same reasonyou just don't see it I'm of a mind to believe...if you observe...and do nothing...your hands are just as dirty you want to save me?where...
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hello beautiful Willow there are no answers sometimes for these kind of questions and if you got a response it’s not likely going to be one you like heartfelt and deep write🌹
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No, she’ll never reply. She’s too busy living in denial to ever do that. Thank you, Brenda 🧡
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Powerfully penned, Willow. Amazing lyrics, really loved the musical style and arrangement my friend. Love the bass and drums starting the second verse for those first bars, before the guitar comes in on the last bars. Excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you! On pieces this close to my emotions, I always know when it feels right because I get goosebumps & cry. I appreciate your comment on this one, my friend
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Powerful and sad. I felt this one. Great writing.
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A lot of emotions rolled into this one. Thank you so much
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I was so angry when I wrote it, & so sad. Hopefully I was able to convey that even a little. She’ll never admit her part. It is what it is. Thank you, girl
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the innocent way her body grooves
she’s a hurricane burning radioactive
Ah yes, the wicked women all men must watch out for. I’ve seen her and avoided the web though it was hard being they usually look so good and irresistible. Men’s will must be strong.
I like the entire thing and its message. I’d love to hear the music to it. It makes me ponder all the great bands out there that will probably never be heard.