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hello dearest Benny I love your poem response thank you very much indeed 💕
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Read Morerisking it all in the pink sunshinemy blush talks to youin a low persuasive waya gentle growl says you're feeling mesomething I can feel in my tummyyou're pretty and I love thatbut you're also hard and that's what really...
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In the burn I wither. That is something. Nicely penned, crimsin
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hello beautiful Fia good afternoon thank you graciously I deeply appreciate your thoughts being so talented a writer 💕
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Read Moreit is with sadness I writeare you seeing metouch a feeling and get to know methe internal conflictweighing on me darkness and lightdepression and I don't talkmy thoughts grow darkwhen I think no one caresmy glaring faults all too...
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That’s terrific and honest.
Its hard to touch another’s suffering unless you’ve suffered yourself….I feel your pain.🙏
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hello dearest Benny thank you graciously for the love here 💕
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You have captured here that which is often so hard to put into words.
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hello lovely Green thank you for the love here 💕
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I’ve been depressed in the past, but some are clinically depressed and can’t get out of it without prescribed drugs. I feel for those people. It’s as though I’ve been released from jail due to time and age and they’re still in.
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hello dearest Tim I’m glad you got out of it it’s not nice especially when it comes and goes without reason thank you for the love💕
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Read MoreRepressing my rage...Locked in a cage...I hold the key...Tis not she...You've forced me to play...You wont get your way...I make the rules...Not you you're a snool...My life is made by my desire....Push me too far you'll end up on...
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You must be Scottish to use a word like ‘snool’.
Good write.
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Haha, by ancestors only, but my soul feels like it should have been born there. How can you miss a place you’ve never been too…..
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I found this so relatable. It was one of my former employers least favorite things about me, but I’d rather be a thorn in someone’s side than someone I can’t stand.
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Some people take things too far and are so controlling.
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Dear S,
I really appreciated the firm stance in this write. It reminded me how quickly I can be overrun if not careful by those who intend to deceive. I enjoyed the meter and rhythm of the rhyming. That’s such a difficult style you did with aplomb. H🌷
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Thank you, im happy to have helped! It’s nice seeing you here! It’s been a while!
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Crimson …nothing is permanent ever.Not joy,not sorrow but despair makes it seem like it will.
Shadows crawl beneath the skin,
where even light cannot seep in.
Hope decays in midnight air
and then despair ignores your prayer.
Take care🙏