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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Chère C.,
Hope you survived the Valentine thing.
To me, it’s like refined food, it looks like the real thing, but when you bite……I love your poem a lot.
And (like more often than not) I love the artwork as well. And it makes me wonder from what place on earth it is pictured.
As I’ve never seen the moon in this position.Any way, you keep surprising me with your work. And I am grateful that you share it.
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“decorating my inner landscapes with hope” my favorite along with that entire stanza.
Wonderful work crim.
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend, incredible flow throughout especially that first stanza. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously ❤️
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Underrated word, ‘connive’. Very expressive. Like a baleful but seductive energy straight from the Abyss….
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This is not a poem. This is a black magic charming spell. 😀
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Read MoreYou sat on the couch, absorbed in something when I slithered onto your lap, wearing just a sundress. I wriggled around and plucked at your shirt, avoiding eye contact, and blushing a little. So, you knew. “You get cute when you’re...
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You are really good at short story writing. You caught the attention and kept raising the stakes. Oh man its good.
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Thank you sweet Fia. Just stretching the fingers to see where they end … I appreciate you providing a venue for that exploration.
Thanks again for the kind feedback!
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Passionately penned, Betty. Amazing storytelling my friend. This write is also hotter than two demons fucking! lol. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Two demons fucking sounds pretty hot. (Are their wieners pronged like their tongues? WHAT?! OMG!)
Hey friend, I also appreciate you. Rock on Damian.
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Hot Erotica Star! xx
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Thank you my friend!
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You’re truly welcome, Betty. I’m published 8x over on Amazon, and I can truly say there are 2 blends of sex and erotica out there: filthy dirty sweary red hot (check out My Pregnant Pause and Joely’s Swim LIVE here) and you write that brilliantly!!! Or there’s the subtler, less crude erotica – like my BEINGS – which sells more and got 5-star amazon reviews from women readers. Might be worth you experimenting? HJ Furl xx
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Hauntingly penned, Brenda. Excellent dark write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian