Powerfully penned, Thomas. This is very good my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

An excellent write, Thomas! “)

Wonderfully executed. Great work here.

Thank you. Much appreciated.

Brilliantly penned, Thomas. A flawless write my friend. Like this one a lot. Appreciate you.

Damian

It’s like Tom Sawyer Comes of Age! LOL. Why should you have backed out? Maybe you better not answer that. Anyway, it all sounds fantastically romantic, and I love the rough, woodsy imagery and casual intimacy. An epic poem about an epic experience, Thomas.

Great atmosphere. I can feel every move you make with this poem. Wonderful in execution & delivery.

Subtle. YES. Erotic. YES. Have something to do with a dormouse. Maybe. 😉

Oh, this is exactly how I take a bath at the end of every day!
And then the children rush in, dumping mice in the tub!
If it were not for your pic, I would have had a completely different take on this rodent epic – but you do have a way of putting a twist in every rat’s tale

Lost in your fingers. Erotic is the word. Very good

Soft-porn erotica at it’s finest. Nice work here.

Beautifully penned, Thomas. Into the book it belongs! Nicely done my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you.

Thank you. The dormouse is a symbol for something else. lol

lol

Congrats, Thomas.

Thank you.