I want so badly to get off the current train. Brilliant, Thomas

Brilliantly penned, Thomas. Outstanding write my friend. Beyond furious with that damn train. Appreciate you.

Damian

Love it! Great work and some marvelous detail in such a short poem.

This is a dark and cutting vision of now.
Regards James

Thank you.

Oh Hell his filling came out. It’s sad that he learned to lie so well. I am happy he did not teach anyone else to do it.

Ha, ha! Thanks for coming back to this, Fia. I am glad to have you read this. It is nothing special or important, but I think there are a few things that fall into those categories. This is certainly very different from any other of my works, and I am happy I got this story out.