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• 1 year, 4 months ago

Swallow Me Whole

Poetry

April 15, 2025

10

I tried to feel somethingI loved her & she loved meI don't know what happenedEverything was going wellThen all of a sudden, I got cold like there was a stranger next to meI tried to get rid of the...

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9 Comments
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Well Damn. That was a eureka moment.
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thanks!
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  That one took a turn. Great write, Keith. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Appreciate it. Thanks
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Thank you
- Daniel Long
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Best part: “I got cold like there was a stranger next to me…” thanks for the great read!
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thank you Daniel. I appreciate you.
- goldenmyst
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Visions, this packed a mighty punch. You wrote your emotions out with the dexterity of a poet who can really make his feelings known with no room for doubt. Well done.
  
  John
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Hello John. This was based on an old relationship I had. Similar thoughts and emotions ran through me at that time. Thanks my friend.
Visions_of_Insanity wrote a new post

• 1 year, 4 months ago

You Never Know When Murder Will Strike

Horror, Short Stories

April 15, 2025

9

After a night of some intense bowling, I saw this awesome pair of bowling shoes near the counter. They weren't black and red. They were yellow & blue. Plus, they were my size. The colors looked great! I decided...

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7 Comments
- Willow
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Green & yellow…wonder what’s special about that combo. Dreams can be such a trip. Happy bowling!
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Not sure. As long as this dream doesn’t become a reality, I’m good. Thanks Willow.
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Maybe one day we’ll go together. Thanks Adira.
- goldenmyst
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Visions, there is not a dull moment in this poem. A darkly lit star of a poem. You write this so superbly. Straight out a horror movie script as only a master screenplay writer can create.
  
  John
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thanks John. I appreciate your kind words.
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Dr. Seuss of horror my friend. That’s what I think. Kick ass write, Keith. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    You rock Damian. Thanks!!
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• 1 year, 4 months ago

We Are Hideous

Poetry

April 15, 2025

6

We are hideousWe mate and create something horrificSluts and killersMean blood spillersWhores and fuckersFools and suckersMonster fucking dadsSisters born with crabsMonster slut mothersIncest fueled brothersWe the monstersOne nation under a demigodWith obligation and injustice for all

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5 Comments
- Jade72
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  I feel we are part of a Stephen King novel sometimes. Great write.
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Good Stephen King novels. Some of his novels are godawful. Thanks Jade.
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  That is true. Thanks Adira.
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  I still thinking Matrix meets Terminator. Way things are going though, could end up like, The Running Man. Powerfully penned, Keith. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    I can see it happening. Appreciate the comments.
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