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Read MoreQuietly I ache to a reality I'll never wake. Though the glimmers of such soothes me, it is never enough to quell this heartache. Quietly I ache, to conceal wounds, I truly cannot. Though it was a natural forethought. Quietly I ache, tormenting aches of these...
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It speaks volumes to what I’m feeling now
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The words create a heaviness in this piece. Well said but filled with so much sorrow. Be well my friend.
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Can feel the sorrow and depth of this piece my friend. Great spill. Appreciate you.
Damian
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The repeated phrases make such a punctuation point in this aching piece.
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I think the idea of death is both scary and peaceful to me. To finally have that moment of nothing sounds good. But nothing also is terrifying as it is unknown. What is after nothing? But yeah, peace one day.
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Amazing piece. DAMN Good Daniel. You’re a great storyteller!
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And this is only the first draft. I am considering making it into a full length novel.
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Brilliantly penned, Daniel. Incredible storytelling my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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As always Damian, thank you!
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Read MoreI am merely a black silhouette in the room. Something plagued by the dreaded psychosis. I am a burnt-out shell of my summery youthful self. These days every moment has a wintry hallucination – flurries of racing thoughts rage in the lacerating gales...
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Violent, dark, horrific. My kind of poem. Nice work Danial.
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. A chilling write my friend. Nicely executed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreLet the storm within outRaging internallyManifests woundsCreates painWhen you are doneCome lay your headListen to my steady heartDo not feel lost and aloneI will guide youLook for the lightIn the infernal darknessLet the tears flowCascading in rivulets on meI...
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Thank you, Will
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Lovely piece Fia. Great work here.
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Thank you, Keith 😊
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Beautifully penned, Fia. This was a lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian 😊
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Look for the light in the darkness. Such a beautiful write, Fia. Bravo!
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Thank you Daniel ☺️
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feels very comfortin
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Thank you, Ambjr 😊
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The everyday can just be heavy. The moment I get to come home to my wife and pets makes it all worth it. Great ink
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Powerfully penned, Keith. What Mary said, sometimes making things right is comforting. Especially on a deathbed. For some reason when I read this I could hear, Robert Stack, narrating it. Like an Unsolved Mysteries episode. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Robert Stack & Unsolved Mysteries is one of my all time favorite shows. I have a DVD box set of U.M. Thanks Damian for the read & comments.
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I have Robert Stack on my GPS giving me directions. It reminds me of “Airplane”. I’m kidding.
You have just blown my mind with this piece, and there’s nothing insane about it. For once, it’s a vision of sanity, and I think everyone is on board with the beauty of forgiveness. It’s odd how death and finality have a way of changing our perspectives so abruptly. Setting things right can be so important. How fortunate were these two for having a middleman that kept them in touch.
Keith is it? I’m Meg. Thanks for that story!
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Airplane rules!! Every now & then I’ll write something tender. I don’t want all of you to think i’m some raging lunatic. I just write whatever comes to mind.
Absolutely right. Let’s not wait until someone is dying to make amends. Be kind and humble to one another.
Thanks Meg.xo
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Hello Adira. Glad you enjoyed this piece. Thank you for the gracious comments.
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This was touching. Made me think of my last visit to my mother who was on hospice with breast cancer. She was barely able to open her eyes to see me, then she was able to make a smile, the last smile I ever saw from her. Cancer took her but couldn’t kill her sweet soul. Bravo 👏
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Hi Daniel. Thanks for sharing your story. Sorry to hear about your mom. Life is fragile. Make the best with your loved ones before we all depart. Thanks for the comments.
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Powerful and poignant.
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Thank you my friend.
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Death brings either the sweetest or the meanest in human beings. In this case, it was love. A heartbreaking and heartwarming write. Both at the same time. Well done, buddy!
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Thank you for the kind words M.E. Glad you enjoyed this piece.
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This is so sad. I feel this Daniel.