Powerfully penned, Keith. Can feel the dark undertones in this one my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Cleverly penned, Keith. You went there again my friend. lol. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerfully penned, Fia. This is a great musing, always dig the musings my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you, Damian. 😊
Chocolate wine strokes again. My friend

Those hands should go to jail!!

I think we all hope to be remembered by those we interact with. Maybe keep a part of us alive. Great ink

Great! Last line brings it home. Nice work Fia..xo

Thank you, Hamid. I appreciate you saying that;))

Forgotten memories that echo, washed away in the dark froth, staring. Fia, this poem is almost like what I write hahahaha. It short, the imagery, delivers a quick punch 👊 👏 the way poetry should be! Bravo!