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Read MoreYou know, back in the day I love me some young men I was willowy, I was spring, Damn I was May I was down to trying every position conceivable Hormones were rampant The body and spirit were ready, willing, and able As work starts...
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Thank you, John. As long as you feel it deep down, then I did it right. lol
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Passionately penned, Fia. You always make the temperature hotter with your writes my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian I try to raise the heat when I can. ;))
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” They start with that whisper that hits behind the ear
A practiced tone
That causes goose bumps and raises those baby hairs ”
Yeahhh…this paints a pic of some nice memories.
Nicely written
Naaj
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Thank you, Naaj😊
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I’ve always been accused of being a grown man… now you know why… this was a great story.. perfectly done…love it.
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Thank you, Sam., You do the whisper thing? Nice;))
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Read More⸻We didn’t need a manual.We had parents who were there—not hovering, not micromanaging,just there.And that was enough.So we learned to handle life.Alone. Early.And just fine.We were told what to doand when to do it.No debates, no feelings circles.No “gentle...
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What a ride. This is fantastic. I was one of those latchkey kids as well. We did it and made it work. Ingenuity & creativity. It made us for what we are today. We weren’t kids sitting in the corner crying about spilled milk or some lame ass shit they cry over today. Nice work here.
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Hi there Vision, I don’t know, I’ve been on this whole spinnaker of how life used to be. I think it’s the fact that the past 30 + years, life in America has just been decimated and eliminated; everything America was, is truly gone. And I’m feeling the burn. It’s not like generations before, where things would change and that was the way life goes, but it hasn’t just changed, It’s just gone.
Thank you for visiting. I always appreciate your presence on my page❤️
Jackie
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I don’t agree with everything but that’s okay. Your work makes you think. It’s a topic that is right at the front of the world but everyone is ignoring it. I like how you just tackled the issue in the room.
You might enjoy Ray Bradbury’s short Story “The Veld” it echoes what you are highlighting here.
Keep up the intensity my friend
I really enjoyed thisJames
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Nice to see you James. I appreciate you coming by to read me. It’s just a crazy world we live in. That’s all. And I will check out Ray Bradbury Veld.
Thank you my friend
Jackie
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Read MoreLust in the candlelight, light that's radiant, where the hot, dripping wax flows. The candlight simmering, the flamelight on our bare bodies, the golden bronze effect of the light on our skin as it glistens with sweat. Cuddled now, hot and sweaty, your body tremors against mine in anticipation...
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Beautifully penned, Daniel. An amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Sensational! You’ve illustrated such a lovely image here.. in the words of my friend, PoetSpeak,
BIG LIKE
xx
~P.G💋
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Read MoreYour body is limited by ropeEyes of fear, as your molested & gropedGo ahead, try it, you can't moveHeart pumping so fast, you do not approve He asks you if he can pound your assIt doesn't matter, as he rams...
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Gritty, raw, and darkly lit. A kind of almost macabre view of a horror scene. You write the dark with great dexterity, my friend. Truly well illustrated.
John
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Thank you my friend. Appreciate you
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Sounds like a horror movie to me my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I love some gruesome horror. Thanks Damian.
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Some bodies are limited by hope…
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Thank you PAR.
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Read MoreCheckout at the marketThere she is21 years oldDropped out of high school at 16Baby in one armFive year old at her feetTwo different fathersThey both left as soon as they knew she was pregnantShe lives with her mom &...
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Powerfully written, highly realistic, and illuminating poem on some people’s lives. You wrote this so well, my friend. The ongoing tragedy is captured with vivid and clear storytelling that gives the reader a glimpse into what is going on with this woman through observations so clear that I can empathize with her. She seems to be a result of an upbringing that left her lost. And you illustrate this perfectly here.
John
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Tragedy & the dark. As you can see that’s what I love to write about. It comes easy for me to illustrate. Thank you John.
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It is a sad reality for most. But her priorities are fucked! Thank you my friend. Appreciate the feedback!
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Truth be told. Life is often cold.
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Thank you Joe.
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Another write that punches you in the gut. Well done!
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Thanks M.E. Appreciate the comment.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Priorities lead to choices, great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That’s the truth. Appreciate the feedback.
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Priorities schmiorities… it is indeed a sad reality for many as Adira stated. But I mean come on??? I’d free bleed if it came down to feeding my kid, something’s gotta give here…
Also hope the POS who gave her the bruises got what he deserved..
Well done my friend, you’re amazing as always!
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Hello P.G Thanks so much for the read and comments. Sadly, this a reality for many in this country. xo
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You did a great job with this, dear Keith! You are a precise observer and fantastic and non judgmental storyteller who léaves it to the reader to make up their own mind. Concerning me, I pity the woman but at the same time I can’t understand that her baby isn’t her first priority. If possible, breastfeeding would be a wise idea to give the child a solid basis for a healthier life. Maybe, just maybe this baby could be the person to break the vicious crcle of violence, poverty and hopelessness.
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Hello Sappho. Options were there for this woman but she chose what mattered for herself, not the baby. You hope the kid has a brighter future, but the % of that is very slim. Thanks my friend.xo
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Love the sheer erotic narrative here that draws me in and makes me want to stay until the very end. Truly a hot poem that inspired bedroom thoughts and feelings. I could feel this deep down where the sun doesn’t shine.
John