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I feel that this is a calling out that we al can relate to, and be enthralled by. it’s an all consuming request that is determined and also inviting too. Like “give me that and I’ll give you this” type of trade. We write with emotions, so perhaps we look for emotions in return. Yeah?
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Fia, I could feel the entreaty of the woman as she beseeched her lover to give her words. I do agree the right words can make for a magical night in our out of bed. This poem speaks to me in a way that I could feel. Very well done.
John
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Thanks for your considered comment.
I only put the political line in to highlight the point that one exists because of the other.
My politics are on the left because that’s where I see less selfishness but in truth there is only a bees dick between most political parties.
Business runs the show.And on a whim.
I think I like you 😜
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Powerfully penned, Keith. This was a very scary film when I was a kid. Love the shock on Issac’s face when Malachai turns on him. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Remember this one my friend, excellent write. That’s a young Lance Henriksen. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Ooohhh. This is good!
Loved take me in the dark so I can see the light
Enjoyed the snapshot lines.