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Read MoreIn a quiet realm where echoes gleam,Where thought becomes both thread and dream,There stands a Cabinet, carved by Muse—A keeper of truths the heart might choose. Its hinges hum with stories untold,Its shelves are lined with myth and gold.Within, the...
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Thank you 😊
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I love that this is not mere page to pen line..welcome to Stars Rite
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Thank you 😊
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This is incredible writing. I’m eager to see more from you. Welcome.
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Thank you so much 😊 though I’m still trying to get the hang of this site
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You’ll get used to it. Are you on any other sites?
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No, I was on one called DUP Deep Uderground Poetry but it’s closed down.
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Most everyone here was on that site. Some never returned after it closed.
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Excellent 🌼
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Thank you 😊
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Beautifully penned, Lizz. The thrill of the write still stirs in us writers. Excellent flow and wordplay my friend. Welcome to Stars Rite. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you 😊 this poem is about my book I’m trying to put together.
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Chère L.,
Hope this finds you well.Love your Cabinet poem.
I read your introduction with pleasure and noticed your intention to put some of your poems to music.
I love that idea.
In fact, most of my poems are put to music. And what I post on StarsRite are poems of other people, as my Dutch poems are so much better that my English ones.So (in short):
Welcome here and maybe one day we can do a cooperation.
Kind regards, Gus-
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Thank you 😊 I’m glad you like it. I wrote it because I’m creating a book and it’s going to be the opening in my book though it’s a working progress.
Sure.
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Thus opened Pandora’s Box of erotic dreams, Lizz! Wonderful to have you aboard. – ‘HJ’
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Thank you 😊
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Totally love your flow Lady, to tight
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Thank you 😊
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Harriet-Jacqui xx posted in the group National Poetry Month
It’s Crying Gas, Girl!
I know Burl, my name’s Furl, my lips curl, I’m your girl!
It’s Crying Gas, Girl!
This gross mask, your big ask, the gas flask, my head cask!
It’s Crying Gas, Girl!
I hate this, I can’t hiss, I can’t kiss, I can’t piss!
It’s Crying Gas, Girl!
The gas stinks, my face pinks, one eye winks, my hair kinks!
It’s Cryi…Read More![]()
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Harriet-Jacqui xx posted in the group National Poetry Month
Oops! I missed some days, oh well:
I Saw Her Crying in Tom Planter’s Field
I saw her crying in Tom Planter’s field,
The blonde-haired girl in black nobody knows,
Her eyes were hollowed out, her raw lips peeled,
She wore a silver bullring through her nose.
She bore the scars of herbicidal birth,
The effluent she drank from river sew…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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It’s all in the details. The little nuances that leans elegantly one direction or the other. This one takes me places
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Thank you Willow. You are right its the nuances. <3
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Fia. Another excellent write my friend. It’s the minute details isn’t it? Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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This is a very reflective piece.
I can sense a lot of careful concentration from the writer.
I admire the determination throughout the stanzas.
This is a dark but incredible read. x
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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
The Pitch
There is dark
And there is pitch
It’s funny how dark can feel comforting
And pitch is where the nightmares make a homeI see your silhouette in the dark
Envisioning warmth from lips
Sounds that roll like sweet butter toffee off the tongue
And I know there is only one thing left to doThen there is the pitch
Alone and n…Read More5 Comments-
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Very good .. but scary vibe too. Great work ….
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Thank you, Navina;)
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Of course 🤗
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Love it when you’re pitch dark, Fia. HJx
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Thank you Hjx
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Fantastic! Welcome to the site.