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Read MoreDawn in your waking eyes, dusk in your dying eyes. Our eyelids peel in daybreak and embrace in nightfall. There was an aurora of tears in your dusking eyes. Now a velvety blackness behind those fallen eyelids. Now a death-like still in those tear-wells. Now a life-like rush in bulging...
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Read MoreI swear you read these lines before A whisper etched, your mind unsure The letters shift, the lines repeat Then vanish quickly, incomplete Is "no, I am" the phase most true Or "Luke, I am" the line you knew Was "febreze" spelled with double e's Or...
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Thank you for commenting..yeah the Mandela effect is crazy..it really tricks the mind
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Cleverly penned, Mstrmnd. Excellent write my friend. You pretty much summed it up perfectly. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you..yeah its wild how we believe what we know then realize we only think we knew what we believed..or it is so sinister that we live in alternate realities
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This is really good. Nice work.
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Thank you..and fun..I have spent many hrs going down the Mandela effect rabbit hole..interesting stuff for sure
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Man, this is pure dopeness.
I truly enjoyed your extravagance of mind
Pressing rewind and fast forward
In real time.Definitely inspires a deeper conversation.
Much respect
Naaj
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Thanks for commenting..apppreciate it..glad u found it interesting
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Read MoreLook what a hot ember it is! Dipped into a fiery horizon from which hell screams, torching a bleeding cold blue sky. The barricade of night, thawed into a limp mold can no longer hold a form upheld by nocturnal façades. Tis’ a day of new beginnings. Why...
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Read MoreThe walls of this tomb breathe, disturbing years of dusty memories icing over my sunken corpse. I’ve lain frozen in time since you sealed me in this eternal bed. Darkness. Oh, how I’d love for the light to find its way pass the coffin lid. Now and again, I’ll...
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This is as much dark and sad as it is beautiful, dear Daniel!
Even after someone passed, memories of them will stay alive in somebody else’s heart!
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Read MoreMy sexual encounter in the American desert translated from French. Enjoy! Five years ago, I was on a bus tour through the Southwest of America, mainly to see the grandeur of the Grand Canyon. But I never reached the canyon....
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Why thank you! I’m posting more erotic short stories coming up. Focusing more on the short story than poetry now.
Daniel
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Amazing piece. I love being caught off guard by the Mandela effect.