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    Silent Conversations

    SILENT CONVERSATIONS   ever notice how silence fights for your attention fights to win over your emotions and declares with conviction vermillion is NOT the description of love   lately I have been noticing many things mostly how silences have grown longer and more frequent how silence has grabbed my tongue stopped its...

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    • These lines are incredible.
      Regards
      James

    • Hi Redzone
      I enjoyed how you put this.
      How silence can be heavy and hard to escape.
      Like it’s actively trying to sabotage you.
      Killer ending amigo!

      • For someone who suffers from depression, silent screams implode, leaving only a muted hollow, faraway look. Alive, but dead inside. This poem represents some of the things people have told me about their struggles with depression. And Adelphina, you are right, silence is “actively trying to sabotage you”. Thanks for your insightful comment.

    • I love it when a poet covers all the avenues of a subject. Excellent writing here, Redzone. Good song too.

    • Silence has been called golden. I once referred to it as prismatic. But you perfectly captured how it can be cold and have a pressurized weight that pulls one down. Many can relate this, I’m sure

      • And sometimes there is a silence that is so strong that even your screams remain silent, internalized and damaging. I have had many a discussion with friends who suffer from depression. This poem came out of those discussions. They want to talk, to express what is on their minds, what they are feeling, but cannot. That “weight” is unbearable. Thank you Willow for your visit and kind words. Both are muchly appreciated.

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    Solace In Chicago

    I got lost in the depths of Chicago tonightSwaying to the horn sections sonic assault Catching the beat with a melody so bright  Hearing this rhythm burning hot as asphalt Smooth transition into another catchy hookA walking bass line marches with the...

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    • I grew up listening to them. They bring back many high school memories. Nice one, Damian.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Love the classic stuff myself. After Kath passed away, Cetera took control. His vision was more pop, and less horns. Like I said the band lost it’s soul without, Terry. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • A beautiful tribute to Chicago and Terry Kath. I love how the poem captures the energy of their horns, bass, piano, and guitar. It perfectly conveys how their classic sound can bring both excitement and solace.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Roma. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Terry Kath, was the heart of the band for sure. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • To find solace in the music. It is a comfort that I need. Nice writing cuz

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It’s something we all need in my opinion. Appreciate you, cuz.

        Damian

    • There is something about classic rock that is so authentic.
      The way it sounds and the tempo. Love the stuff!
      Wonderful tribute write Damien.
      I especially loved the piano is simmering line!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adel. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I love that line as well, gotta love the classics. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • A fine and much deserved tribute to one helluva guy .. Write and rock on my fine literary friend .. Neville 😎👍

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. He was one of a kind for sure. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • There really wants another sound like theirs, was there? I’m permanently haunted by the music of the 80s and theirs always lands on my mental and emotional playlists. This is a beautiful tribute, my friend

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. They had some decent songs in the 80’s. But Peter Cetera took control of the group once Terry died. He envisioned a more poppy sound with less horns. It just never had the soul of the classic 70’s sound. Terry Kath was their heart, and they were never the same without him. Just my opinion. Appreciate you.

        Damian

        • See, I always learn something from you in these. I wasn’t allowed to listen to the radio until the 80s so I missed most of the ‘before’ era. I’ll have to go hunting…

    • Chicago is absolute badass. I never liked the pop-driven 80’s stuff, and I believe it skews the perception of this band for many. Live performances as powerful as any metal band. Solid tribute.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Benjamin. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I agree. Cetera’s vision of the band was a huge departure from Kath’s. The 70’s stuff had balls, it had heart and soul. Killer live band, Kath’s blazing solo on 25 or 6 to 4 comes to mind. You know your music. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I like it when you put us nearer an artist, or group, and we can perhaps learn a bit or just revel in the story too.
      You’re an interesting man, Mr Damian. Thank you for sharing some of your talent and history with us! I enjoy it all.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Well thank you, that means a lot to me my friend. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Having older sisters gave me access to all types of music from an early age. Can still recall hearing ‘If You Leave Me Now’ for first time. Your words are a poignant tribute.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Ghosteen. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I love all kinds of music. I started out a metal head, but I’ve evolved over time. lol. Good song. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Hello Damian. Excellent write as usual. Never was a fan of Chicago. My parents were huge into them during the 70’s. The one album I do appreciate and own is their debut from 69. Terry Kath destroys it on that release. His playing is right up there with Hendrix.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. The first album was killer, Kath, was an amazing guitarist. Hendrix himself, told one of the horn players in the band, that Kath was better than him. According to legend that is. lol. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Band like Chicago were so good and creative. We don’t get bands like that anymore. Great ink friend.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. No we don’t it’s a shame. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I absolutely love the music of Chicago. They rock my world. And your poem is true to the city and the band. I felt the urban pulse of he music an city that was vibrant and totally had me in the world of that band and the city. As rhythmic as a song and colorful as the greatest jazz poems. Enjoyed this immensely.

      John

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Love them too, Terry Kath, was their heart and soul. Chicago after his death was a more pop/rock. Thank you for the excellent commentary. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Wasn’t it Jimi Hendrix who said Terry Kath was THE best guitar player – EVER? Wow, what a sound this group had…what talent. I caught them in concert in my high school years, and was blown away by the “horn sections sonic assault”. I had a crush on James Pankow, but Terry was truly the heart and soul of this group. What an awesome tribute to one of music’s elite bands. Thank you for your inspiration, Damian!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Kelly. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’ve heard that Hendrix said that as well. So cool you got to see them live, that had to be an amazing show. Elite musicianship throughout that group. The man on the sly trombone, Mr. Pankow. Danny Seraphine was a beast on the drums. But, Terry was the man. He made the guitar talk and sing. He had a hell of a voice himself, very soulful. Thank you for the lovely commentary. Appreciate you.

        Damian

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    A Few of My Favourite Juxtapositions

    A Few of My Favourite Juxtapositions It was an umbrella    for sure .. But she called it her    parasol .. I called it a tank top But she    called it a camisole .. We made love in the afternoon as soon as    the rain had stopped...

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    • You called it one thing, she said it’s another. lol
      The last stanza is true.

      Life today just seems

      to be one

      long pose and a series

      of less than

      obvious juxtapositions ..

      • My word, you got it Fia .. thanks a minion .. You just made the whole thing worthwhile .. Cheers a very grateful Neville

    • That’s very good Neville 🤘

    • Cleverly penned, Neville. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Different interpretations of the same things always make for interesting experiences. And frustrating. I enjoyed the flow of this. Oddly like the rain in the middle, capped by the brolly 😊

      • Oh’ wow, bless my soul thanks for kindly checking in & giving my little scribble a peek .. I shall return the favour and look forward to catching up with you again in the future ma’am .. In the meantime, here’s me wishing you all the very best of All Good Things .. Neville 😎👍

    • A little bit of this and a little bit of that, and between the differences lies a connection and that connection can lead to sooo many adventures and possibilities. How do we learn about each other? Isn’t it through those “juxtapositions” that we come to know and appreciate each other?? The key, I think, is not just the different translations, but that we are willing to listen and hear and learn what they are saying. I sometimes think we are a room full of “statements” and way too little “whys”. I think your poem points to what is possible, if we grab hold of those “juxtapositions”. Excellent writing Neville.

      -Curt

    • “something
      did always got lost in
      translation .. ”
      Something I can relate to, Differences can add excitements and fun but at other times it lead to misunderstanding. Anyway, it’s a truth that life is not one colour, it’s endless of colours, and that’s the beauty of it.

      • I’m pretty sure it happens often and to most people & I agree wholeheartedly with your deduction about colour and endless colours & of course the beauty that is borne of them .. Oh’ how I wish we might share a strong coffee one fine day .. 😎🌻💛⭐👍

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    Dream-Making in the Suburbs

    At night asleep  Alison's dreams are scattered  across the bedroom wall  like grainy cine film    No sound from the  nocturnal soap opera,  just hum of Alison sleeping  against somnolent city rhythm    Amber streetlights  steal through red curtains,  waiting for insomnia cinema to begin    Alison's legs up and apart  reminder, we touch...

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