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Happy morning, Lady Fia 🌤️
Thank you for looking at this rather sombre little composition on self-observation and responsibility.
If anyone, I knew it would be You who would grasp its true essence.Hugs! ⁓ Richard🖌️
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this is another great Richard..
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With a sincere thank you, Sam,
I appreciate your graciously generous comment and the time taken to read this humble poetic effort.Many blessings, Fellow Poet! ⁓ Richard🖌️
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Powerfully penned, Richard. Excellent write my friend. Accountability catches up to everyone at some point. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you most gratefully, Damian 🙏
Your praise and understanding wisdom of this humble piece, along with encouragingly expressed appreciation, are among those gifts that inspire me to keep writing.
Many Springtime blessings, Syr Poet! ⁓ Richard🖌
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Read MoreBuilt a foundation on a fault line Temperamental bias stirs beneath No substance flows from the vine Every shortcut is laced with grief When the walls tumbled down It revealed a foolish arrogance Under that smile lives a frown A string-puppet born to dance Rain pours from...
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Happy Birthday cuz. This is one of those poems that make you feel…sad while telling you the truth.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you for the birthday wishes.. Appreciate you, cuz.
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Happy birthday my dear pisces friend… a big hug!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, PAR. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you for the birthday day wishes. Actually, I’m a Triple Pisces.. A big hug back brother! Appreciate you.
Damian
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First, I hope you had a fantastic and soul-filling birthday. I have read this one 3 times now. I finish, sigh, scroll back up and read it again. It sinks into the mental marrow and stirs thoughts. You are a master of layers, my friend. I’m glad this one bubbled out of the “not yet” vault. It needed sunlight and shadows on its bones
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It was a good birthday overall, played some piano, talked to J.J. Burton, and spent time with the wife and kids. Thank you for the b-day wishes. I definitely write in layers, probably because everything I observe has layers, including myself and humans in general. I come by it naturally I guess. lol. The “not yet” section has tons of writes in it, although some need work or at the very least a tweak or two. Always enjoy your commentary my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Congratulations Damian on finding these words & breathing fresh life into each one .. Oh’ and on your birthday too .. Neville 😎👍
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I try.. Thanks for the b-day wishes kind Sir. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Captivating and intriguing piece.
You’ve got me hooked from the start. I was drawn to this by its title.
Strong choice of words. Exquisite in its own way.
A bold and daring read. x
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Rosie. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you for your amazing commentary and support. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian this song on mortality and the grim reaper was one of your very best. The sheer lyrical strength was formidable here. I loved every roaring line. You really made this come alive for me. I am amazed.
John
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Thank so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’m amazed after 35 summers of doing this writing thing I haven’t lost my love for the craft. I’ve had ups and downs sure, if I were to ever lose that love then I might have something to worry about. lol. Enjoyed your commentary. Appreciate you.
Damian
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“Built a foundation on a fault line” I think this is a just as good if not a more accurate description that old adage of built on quick sand, because with a fault line, at any minute of any day, a quake opens up and swallows things up quick.
Great work here Damian.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Wally. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I lived through the era where it seems everyone was afraid of quicksand. lol. Thank you for your continued support. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian DeadLove posted in the group Music is Art
“I sure could use a vacation from this bullshit three ring circus sideshow of freaks.”
Maynard James Keenan
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Read MoreWill you remember mebeneath all this sandWill you recall a timewhen my love was lush I have not forgotten you, not beneath this heat, not beneath the years ...
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
This is so sweet and I love the back and forth. It worked well. You can see the conversation between the two of you. Very nice collaboration.
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Thank you Fia! It just kind of flowed for me.
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Yeah, me and Del seem to converse pretty well. LOL. She is quite the inspiration for me, in writing and in life!
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By the way, that flower is beautiful.
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I have a few flowering plants, and Del has one too, a yellow Hibiscus! The purple one I got when Del was here for Valentines. I got her a dozen roses of various colors and that purple plant!
I like them all, they help me find peace!
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I love this:). Thanks for collaborating with me sweetie.
I also got to give a shout out to Crimsin since she inspired me to try something related to the desert:)
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You can post it on your page too, if you want to babydoll. Hey it was your idea to do this, I just followed your lead!
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![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
Sure. Not sure I’ll get the spacing as perfect as you!
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Beautifully penned, Mark & Adel. What a lovely collaboration, really love the back and forth between you two, as in life and in love, your words also show your undeniable connection. Nicely done. Appreciate you both.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. Her and I have a remarkable amount in common. And thankfully our creative writing is what ultimately got us together. That is a huge reward!
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hello the both of you this is true love what it feels like what it looks like… so much passion time nor place can part just beautiful ❤️
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Aww thank you! She is an incredible woman. I get motivated just seeing her.
Actually, hers and my humor and witty banter made everything so easy for us. very comfortable from the beginning. We get along really well. Writing is the spark, but her and I maintain the fire.-
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that’s beautiful ❤️
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You guys are like the dynamic duo of poetry, tight work dude
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Oh, we are pretty dynamic in a few ways! Thanks though, because it was writing that got us together. It was the crazy humor that snagged us! LOL
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The ebb and flow of this collab is beautifully harmonious!
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Me and her seem to ebb and flow pretty well together! 😉
Thank you for the cool commnt!
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I like this and I wholehearted agree that one must face their Karma. No running from it.