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Read MoreYr unig wirionedd Love flew out of your mouth in hieroglyphics like an invitation to a sky wedding writ on the wrists of kites Dawn ghosted, as a ship’s prow through windows tangled in curtain rigging in the way silence enters an emptying room sunrise gallows hang heavy...
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Thank you. There is something enchanting, and yet, eerie of the ocean. It’s bigger & greater than human kind.
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The first line immediately sucked me in.
You do not waste any words with your poetry and you let us see what we see. I really like that in poetry.
You are an amazing wordsmith.
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Thank you. Even as a kid, on a rough council estate, always found scribbling to be cathartic.
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Read MoreThe moon on her dress corruscates my fingers with cobalt shards of icebergs, rolling fingerprints beyond fabric Tidal hair breaches the breakers down her back, the last waterfall on earth weeps for every desire lost at sea Catching the pearls of her eyes in trawls of my dilated bleeding, if...
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You make me think…
It’s cool, I’m good at it!
I enjoy the complexity of your writes. The vocabulary. The nuanced messages. Even, a word I never knew until you shared it.
So thank you for the enhanced ability of your writes. It makes me stronger by reading them. And enjoying them.-
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As always, you are too kind Mark. I don’t miss many from DU, but you are definitely on the missed list.
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This truly shows your intelligence and talent. Very supernacular.
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Ha. I’m loving “supernacular” Sounds a bit like an Oasis song. Thank you A.
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I agree with previous commentors on the talent.
I like the analogies presented in this write.
Especially fond of the last stanza…reading this makes me feel like I saw her memories
just before they entombed her under the cathedral floor.j.
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Thank you.
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Read MoreUnder the slumping shoulders of the cafe's awningI watched tiny rain circles loosely burst in puddleson the ground whilemy hair lightly waved fromSeptember's weary winds.Nat King Cole sang softly"A Blossom Fell,"on small hanging speakers when she strolled byquickly catching...
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beautifully written I felt this 💕
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Thank you, Crimsin
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Best revenge, live happily ever happy without them holding a place inside you. Easy to say, I know. Yet, writing it out is also great therapy and makes you breathe better. Our success comes from trial and error. You succeed regardless.
Write it out amigo.-
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Thanks very much for your comment, Styx.
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Beautifully penned, Tim. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks very much, Damian.
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I note you still have it .. exquisitely poemed good sir .. Regards to both you n ya pen .. Neville
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I appreciate that, Neville, thanks. 🙂
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The boat theme in this is eerily good.