Strangely brilliant.

The tension between digital distance and primal yearning – between the “computer screen” and “bones falling out of pillows”
– is utterly captivating. The imagery is beautiful and sensual, a collision of technology and raw desire.

Outstanding.

Life can be a sad experience later in life. The loss of a spouse hurts so bad and memories become the new reality. This is well told, Julie.

Hi thanks Tim it can be a spouse a partner a family member or indeed friends yes thanks so much I appreciate!

Powerfully penned, Julie. Excellent imagery my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is excellent ink Julie .. the sadness that clearly and so eloquently flow throughout can be truly felt .. Kindest Regards, Neville

The crackle, the falling, the fading footprints -this poem captures the fleeting passage of time and memory with such honesty and quiet, aching beauty.

Well written, Julie. Not too heavy and not fluff. It sets a wonderful tone and soothes the reader as they progress through it. Awesome results.

This brought back many poignant memories, thank you.