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Read MoreThe night was a quiet,vast, velvet canvas.I stood beneath it,and saw a shooting star -an angel of unwavering hopeblazing across the darklike a skipping stoneon the surface of a pond,as divine grace danced upon it.Suddenly, all the stars came...
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Beauty recognized is beauty shared. Thanks for seeing it!
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What an awesome sight to witness. I would love to have seen this myself. The night sky is a source of fascination for me. Celestial fireworks indeed. Spectacular imagery. Enjoyed very much Romaj.
Chris
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Thanks so much, Chris! I’m glad you enjoyed the imagery. The poem was my attempt to capture that exact mix of awe and wonder the night sky inspires. It was actually based on a recurring dream I have. I appreciate you taking the time to read it.
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Everyone should witness a shooting star in their lifetime. As the Northern Lights, it makes human kind feel so small, but within the heart, an explosion.
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Thank you for this beautiful observation. You’ve captured the exact feeling I was trying to express. That sense of feeling so small in the face of the universe, but at the same time, experiencing a powerful explosion within the heart. I love your comparison to the Northern Lights. I’m glad the poem resonated with you.
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Viewing the Northern Lights are akin to sitting in the electric chair and feeling your ancestors tuning into the most extraordinary orchestra. Other worldly.
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Wow, what an incredible description – “ancestors tuning into the most extraordinary orchestra” gave me chills.
I’ve never seen the Northern Lights myself, but it’s a dream of mine. Your words make me want to see them even more! Thank you
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An electric green meteor coming your way.
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Haha, I’ll keep my eyes open! That would make quite the sequel to this poem. Thank you
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Roma. Breathtaking imagery and amazing wordplay my friend. Welcome to Stars Rite! Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian, Thank you for the warm welcome. I appreciate you too, my friend.
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Aww, that is insightful. As long as you did not do a “Hickory Dickery Dock” poem I am sure your poems landed it mark more often than you want to admit.
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Ha .. Bless you Fia .. I’m afraid the clock eventually caught up with me .. but that aside .. I’m sure you already know that a true gentleman never tells .. 😎💛👍
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Certainly your art is the real one! the art that shapes the inner self caring less about the materials, sure we (specially us women😏) should take care of our outside beauty but not neglecting the inside one, inner beauty shines on the face, outside beauty feels hallow. and don’t worry, even if we are good with our art, it doesn’t mean that we can get the specific man we want lol, anyway… I love this smart, brilliant one dear Neville, good coffee ☕ morning and POETRY (hint!) ;)..
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I’m still struggling to get a handle on this site my friend .. But You are incredibly insightful, astute, self aware and bloomin kind .. Thank you so much for the visit and your understanding .. Neville 🌻⭐💛👍
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Cleverly penned, Neville. I got a sense of Deja Vu, that ending seems familiar. Excellent write my friend. I can relate. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Bless you Damian .. and back at ya my fine literary friend .. Neville 😎👍
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Beautiful.