Nicely penned… flows so well… great sustained rhyme…

Thank you.

Appreciate the comment

hello dearest poet this is a very difficult write my mind plays tricks on me when things are too painful so in a way I understand hugs 💕

Powerfully penned, Drieks. This pulled at my heartstrings my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Our minds never remember exactly how things were, it fills gaps with perceptions etc.
The mind lies and you haven’t forgotten the face.
Great write.🙏

Very gripping write…

Intense read.
You got the mind and the heart working.
Regards
James

Powerful work. Tremendous

Brilliant storytelling, Meg. Appreciate you.

Damian

Once again, Megan🎖

Mystery, excitement, hardcore, tender … whatever/whenever perfection in a scenario demands, your pen seems to instinctively command visual diction with the stroke of a master artist’s brush.

You continually assure us of your raconteuric skills on any level in every theme, breathing life into the utmost sensual or deeply erotic scene, to characters’ personalities that take on verisimilitude as though we could reach out and touch them, smell their breath, feel their heat, actually hear the emotional timbre in their voices, and see the colors of their eyes, as their pupils dilate and flex.

Simply, enviously brilliant, Lady-Author … you’re provenly the best!
How very fortunate we are you share! ⁓ Richard🖌

Richard, it’s so wonderful to have you following along with me. Your comments blow my mind. You make me so happy! Sorry for the delay in the next chapter. Hopefully this week.

xoxoxo

Powerful writing.

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian