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Read Morei dig with both handsmud swallowinmy wrists and forearmspullin downwardthe weight of the earthdraggin against my shoulders roots knot round my fingersknuckles cracked open by rocksdirt packed under my nailsrainwater runnin browndown my throatslippin deeperand the holekeeps begginto become my...
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Powerfully penned, 253. Another excellent write that makes me feel claustrophobic my friend. I too have written about quicksand or trying to escape the grave. Amazing read. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreYour hips and thighsNeed to feel my palmsGladly I will serve youReceive and relish this timeBare your teethLet me see the defianceLet me hear that inner growlWe are not going to stop tonightYou will be worn out before meStruggle...
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Passionately penned, Fia. Another excellent write that’s fire my friend. This one wasn’t for the tame of heart.. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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No it wasn’t;)) Thank you Damian
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The ink is dark, but screaming. I like it, Fia.
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Thank you, Atticus;)
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A fearsome statement. Full of fire.
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Thank you, James;)
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OMG! what an aperitif for dark pleasures to come, Fia xx
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Thank you, Hj;)
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Passionately penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend and this is the tamed down version? This was fire. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Yes it is. haha. Thank you cuz. :))
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I take it that you are sinking down into the mud. The more you pull yourself up the wetter the dirt gets making it feel impossible to get out of it. Interesting piece