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Wonderfully executed. Nice work.
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I like the way the commas
hold the piece together…While the line breaks
moderate the rhythm…Nice metapoetics…
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Brilliantly penned, LDF. Love the flow. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Bluevelvet and
JusTim are now friends
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Poetic Gawdess and
Poetspeak are now friends
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You know, if you read this poem quickly, it gives me the impression that she had to get it out because something imminent is about to happen. Good spill