Brilliantly penned, PAR. Into the book it belongs! This may be your masterpiece my friend, or perhaps one of many masterpieces in your case. It’s incredible dialogue but their tongues speak poetry, not just casual conversation words. Damn, this was Chef’s Kiss. Thanks for sharing my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

The back-and-forth banter is done well. The use of questioning each other I enjoyed.

Viva Keith… I keep waiting for your comments.

Brilliantly penned, Fia. Once again you’re a great storyteller and I always enjoy the dialogue you write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you, Keith;))

Woow ❣️❤️‍🔥

I mean, it’s a good question right?! Glad you enjoyed, thank you.

xx
~P.G💋

HJ it is always such a pleasure having you in my comment section. So glad you got a good feel 😉 xx

Mission accomplished! ❤️
xx

Passionately penned, P.G. Might I add while it did got hot in here, that this is also a very clever write my friend. Love breaking the 4th wall much? lol. That was really cool actually giving the reader a role inside the fantasy, by the way it occurs to me if you didn’t intend it that way and were somehow unaware, that I might have just opened Pandora’s box. I’m going with you intended it that way. Fantastic spill. Appreciate you.

Damian

Erotica with humor woven into it hehe 😜 I like that! Bravo!

Daniel

I am not late to this party just late in commenting. lol
Woman! Omg fire is not the word, more like a sticky inferno of sexual domination. Love it.

Playing with fire burns,
As these hot lines playing with us.

Shh..I’ve got the keys. But not now.

Well played out erotic scene. Loved how the anticipation bult as the story unfolded. And loved the playful reactions you had as he orchestrated your pleasure.

John

Tick tock

Great write Fia.

Powerfully penned, Fia. Always dig your musings my friend. This one gives me a sense of Deja Vu. lol. Appreciate you.

Damian

You are right, Keith. Thank you