Hi,

Very beautiful lines in hindi.
In native language the poetry looked still more original.

Jessy Jacob

By the way you were not searchable for some time. I looked for you but you were not here.

It does feel awful to kill a living animal but they are dangerous and they steal food. I hope your okay.

Thanks Fia for reading.
I really just wanted it to leave but rats arent inclined to do that.Im ok with it now but I still wasn’t thrilled about killing it.
🙏

This is cool. I relate to the nervous energy at times I just keep going.;))

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Another excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

Chère C.,
A little rhyme replying your lovely poem:

This photo’s truly showing
What I always knowed*
Parking on the sidewalk is
How to define off road

So rope in a big wheel
and you’ll be certain of
One big wheel will be enough
If you want lasting love

Clumsy? Yes!
But so what!
There’s more than enough people who take themselves too seriously…

*Dion Dimucci’s past sense of knowing
Warm greetings, Gus