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Read MoreI was discouraged at therapy that my face was hideousNo one knew a sinner unless they looked at their fatherThe mother of your sons biological abortionLike a pistonLike a slug waiting to eat saltDisintegration of the molten force underneath...
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Miss you too Damian. Appreciate the feedback!
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This poem is raw and fearless. The line about the father hit especially hard – it carries so much weight and truth. The imagery throughout is visceral and powerful, like a scream turned into poetry.
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Thanks for the awesome feedback!
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Read MoreThis morning I just looked out my windowAccross the streetI saw my neigbor place a gun to his dog's headHe blew the dog's brains out all over the placeHe walked calmly back into the houseA few moments laterHe dragged...
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Now it makes me think who needed to be trained the child and dog or the parents not watching them at all????
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Getting rid of annoyances around my neighborhood would make me quite happy. Thanks Fia
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Powerfully penned, Keith. What kinda neighborhood you living in? lol. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I live in Mr.Robinson’s neighborhood. That’s a deep cut from early SNL. Thanks Damian.
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I love the unexpected! This was fantastic!
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Thanks Paula! You rock!
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Read MoreLENNY'S BELTOnce upon a time...Paula got her ass beatby a thick leather belt.owned by stepdad Lenny.The pain was so bad thatI disassociated andbecame Bitch!Bitch cooks, cleans andthe laundry is alwayswashed, folded and ironed!Eventually Bitch makes atiny mistake and out...
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Wow! I’m speechless. With each write you’re revealing more and more scary info that keeps changing the full picture. I wish none of what happened to you existed.
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Thanks Tim! Me too.
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FUCK! Your stories captivate me. At the same time, you went through some heinous shit as a child.
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Read MoreAwait the coming storm I will, Amid its bearing swells, I stand stoically still. I look up into the clouded heavens for prayer, little did I know there was evil in the air. Once more, staring into that gray, I shall never see the...
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Read MoreThese stars are black across the white sky. In happy madness - I stare up into the abyss. Inspired madmen are pure lunatics. I could not speak to this storm, so, it gently spoke to me. This blizzard will make you shiver, you will sense it creeping closer. I...
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Powerfully penned, Keith. This is classic you my friend. The Dr. Seuss of horror. I’ve missed you brother. Appreciate you.
Damian