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Read Morespellbinding in an aloof moodnot suited for others companysilently casting on the windchanting internallylet this song be hearda daisy of affectiona dash of hope to landprotection hinder not the way of loveinteresting asylum, enchanted hearts under a vowseeking redemption...
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hello dearest Damian good morning thank you graciously I appreciate you ❤️
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Mystic and beautifully written. The ending verses reminds me somehow of the movie The crow. “)
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thank you graciously dearest ME though I’ve never seen the movie ❤️
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Read MoreHere comes the man of mirrorsThe mirrors on the man mirroring the roomWith the furniture having a conversationA painting on the wall:A horse trampling a bouquette of flowers Horses in me, and out of me, trampling the soul. A hand of...
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hello dearest ME I myself don’t know where my poems come from this a great glance into your soul ❤️
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I believe my poems are a part of me. They come from my subconscious. 🙂
Thank you my friend for reading and support! Highly apprecited! <3
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Thank you, Damian! Highly appreciated “)
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This is a hell of a write, my friend — very powerful; but I see a typo, I think, when you wrote, “In a battle of write and earse” when I believe that last word should be “erase,” yes?
Also, you may not be aware of the big LISTEN button that now lives on this page and no doubt many more of yours as well as many others who labour but are not aware of our unwanted AI reader who has hitch-hiked on the work of everyone who has not attached the #excludetx tag to their work.
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Thank you brother for reading and the comment. Also for both the correction and exclude tag. I appreciate it! “)
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This is quite mind-blowing.
I admire the punchy and reflective lines through each stanza.
I can sense this is a personal piece, it describes an emotional journey taking place.
It is enlightening and tragic at the same time.
A pleasure to take in. x
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Thank you, Rosie C! It means so much to me. It is indeed a personal piece. “)
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Dude…This is a kick ass piece. Your writings always intrigue me.
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Thank you, Keith! Highly appreciated. “)
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That carries a stark rhythm, the triple negation (“no man shall endure nor beast”) gives it a biblical, almost covenantal tone. The phrase “monstrous loneliness” works well because it personifies isolation as something with appetite and form. Appreciate you.
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Thank you PAR for reading and the feedback! I appreciate you as well. “)
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A great mystery unfolds. The nature of the muse.
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Thank you, Knight! I appreciate ir. “)
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Read MoreLeaving the lights on in heavensucking the blood from my veinsuntil I bleed, castrated by bladeridding me of my vice as I sit flamesextinguishing me of my desiresforever where there is coldon purgatory’s treadmillfiery embers lick at my feetblinded...
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Thank you for another great collaboration experience, dear Atticus! You have and inspiring impact on my creativity!
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It was the both of us, and I should thank you.
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congratulations you two this is excellent ❤️
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We thank you, Brenda.
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Read MoreNo Michelangelo am Imy hands, turning to stonearcheology of my breath dissolving reaching tomorrow's fate of cold tongue naked and unadorned, no taste for chivalry or the ego of my hands disappearingat my lover's grave
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A dark and thought provoking poem. Coldness is a very expressive metaphor for transience. And this is exactly what we are – mortal. Facing the cold grave, there will be nothing left the but the Eternal soul. We should care for it at least as thoroughly as a knight does for his armor…
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Thank you, Elke.
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian