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Read MoreSpeak to meWords insight and exciteSpeak to meCradle me in actionSpeak to meTell me the nuance of your touchSpeak to meI overflow in anticipationSpeak to meLet it be rough and rawSpeak to metake me in the dark so I...
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Thank you so much, Adel. It was fun.
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Passionately penned, Fia. This write was fire my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian,))
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I feel that this is a calling out that we al can relate to, and be enthralled by. it’s an all consuming request that is determined and also inviting too. Like “give me that and I’ll give you this” type of trade. We write with emotions, so perhaps we look for emotions in return. Yeah?
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Thank you Styxian;))
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Fia, I could feel the entreaty of the woman as she beseeched her lover to give her words. I do agree the right words can make for a magical night in our out of bed. This poem speaks to me in a way that I could feel. Very well done.
John
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Thank you, John;))
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Oh yes! Tell me more…more…more!
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Ooo, RPM. (Smiling)
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Read MoreI keep forgettin that quiet isn’t punishment it’s just what peace sounds like before i ruin it
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I crave silence, like I crave chocolate.
Then it was ruined by the alarm.Short and holds a lot of meaning
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Powerfully penned, twofiftythree. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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this is fucking awesome.
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Read MoreI carved into my heartsplit thru the ribsdrug out the messsteam risin off the part of methat used to matterit made a wet sounda pulse that refused to quit you leaned in close and made a facetold me you hated...
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This is nice gore, and it’s sweet that you added the candy corn. Will never look at it the same way again.
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gotta make it festive.
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was meant to have bit of gore in surface. underneath is bout the kinda love that consumes and leaves nothin untouched. lettin someone in all way in and bein able to hand them…all the messy parts. and them just take it…happy to have it. and yeah…the vulnerability in it all. so both. based on fia suggestin write halloween poem but had to have candy corn in it.
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really appreciate that.
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Powerfully penned, twofiftythree. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read Moremy therapist said control’s an illusion but so is forgiveness so is stability so is peace so is progress so is time so is trust so is love so is hope so is most of me even on a good...
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This is an interesting take on life. Who truly have control 24/7?
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not a damn person…
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nah he mentioned somethin bout lookin at the parts of me I’m tryin to protect by callin everythin I crave fake. but I’m pretty sure he’s tellin his therapist…”jesus christ i should’ve became a podiatrist instead” after every session with me.
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Powerfully penned, twofiftythree. This write has depth my friend. Excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Ooohhh. This is good!
Loved take me in the dark so I can see the light
Enjoyed the snapshot lines.