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Read MoreThe Issue has been resolved with the editing. Thank you
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Read Morefists too quickmouth too loudanger always waitinjust behind my teeth I was the kinda boyfathers warn their daughters boutbut she never listened she looked at melike the noisewasn’t the whole story she saw the boywho wrote poemswho played classical musicwith bloodied knucklesand...
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This is a sweet poem. Make one think of the past.
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thank you fia
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Nicely put. Sometimes we take chances and hope for the best.
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appreciate it adelphina
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Beautifully penned, 253. Excellent write my friend. There is always a person who can see through all the smoke and mirrors one might try to hide behind, I speak from experience of course. Amazing read. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you
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Read MoreWe know there is an issue with the editing capability. We have been working on it and hope to resolve it as soon as possible. I will keep you all posted
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Read MoreWill you remember mebeneath all this sandWill you recall a timewhen my love was lush I have not forgotten you, not beneath this heat, not beneath the years ...
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This is so sweet and I love the back and forth. It worked well. You can see the conversation between the two of you. Very nice collaboration.
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Thank you Fia! It just kind of flowed for me.
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Yeah, me and Del seem to converse pretty well. LOL. She is quite the inspiration for me, in writing and in life!
Thank you, Fia. We gave it a shot!-
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By the way, that flower is beautiful.
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I have a few flowering plants, and Del has one too, a yellow Hibiscus! The purple one I got when Del was here for Valentines. I got her a dozen roses of various colors and that purple plant!
I like them all, they help me find peace!
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I love this:). Thanks for collaborating with me sweetie.
I also got to give a shout out to Crimsin since she inspired me to try something related to the desert:)
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You can post it on your page too, if you want to babydoll. Hey it was your idea to do this, I just followed your lead!
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Sure. Not sure I’ll get the spacing as perfect as you!
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Beautifully penned, Mark & Adel. What a lovely collaboration, really love the back and forth between you two, as in life and in love, your words also show your undeniable connection. Nicely done. Appreciate you both.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. Her and I have a remarkable amount in common. And thankfully our creative writing is what ultimately got us together. That is a huge reward!
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hello the both of you this is true love what it feels like what it looks like… so much passion time nor place can part just beautiful ❤️
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Aww thank you! She is an incredible woman. I get motivated just seeing her.
Actually, hers and my humor and witty banter made everything so easy for us. very comfortable from the beginning. We get along really well. Writing is the spark, but her and I maintain the fire.-
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that’s beautiful ❤️
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You guys are like the dynamic duo of poetry, tight work dude
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Oh, we are pretty dynamic in a few ways! Thanks though, because it was writing that got us together. It was the crazy humor that snagged us! LOL
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The ebb and flow of this collab is beautifully harmonious!
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Me and her seem to ebb and flow pretty well together! 😉
Thank you for the cool commnt!
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Read MoreWhen you stop dreaming, do you die?When you stop crying, because the well is dryWill you understand that I am more than just what you seeIs it hard to comprehend that I will always be me I was born in...
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Oohhh. Let it rip Fia!!
Love the kick ass vibe chica!-
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Thank you sometimes listening to music gets me going. lol
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write with some clever wordplay my friend. Dig the vibe! Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. glad you liked it;))
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hello beautiful Fia your strength makes you beautiful…this is awesome and emotive poetry… ❤️
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Thank you Crimsin, you are sweet for saying that.
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Nice rhyming with a little fire Lady, Tight
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Thank you, Me:))
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The thing about wounds is that if we don’t get them clean before they seal, infection will begin the rot. And that is toxic. Fierce statement here, Fia
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Thank you, Willow;))
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You have a strong voice Fia. A voice that says what needs to be said, that keeps it real. And you put that voice into your art. Loved reading your poem Fia.
-Curt
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Thank you so much, Redzone;))
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Damn woman! Who got your knickers in a bunch? LOL
Kidding. I love a good kick ass write. I like confidence! You really got your points across for sure. Very creatively at that.
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Thank you, Styx. I was listening to some music and it got me going. haha
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Fia with a S on her chest. Made me sit right up in my chair.
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Ohhh, love it. Thank you Kay-1
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Thank you so much, nontoxicdart
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Super charged into a poetic poem of powerful emotions for this person who judges and whom in the end your let go with your hopes for their better future. You put great heart into this poem and I could feel your words like a piece of music that kept me rapt throughout.
John
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Thank you John:)
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Thanks for the info, Fia. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian