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    Just a quick heads-up! At the top of the main screen, you’ll see several tabs that let you explore different types of writing. Simply click on the one that interests you.

    If you scroll to the right, you’ll find a new tab labeled “EROTICA.” This section features erotic poems, perfect for those who want to dive right into that genre…Read More

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    I hear the words you place before me on the flat groundI hear the words you use as a wall to block and shut me outI understand not wanting to come too closeI understand the heat is too muchYet...

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    N.E. Challenge

    Hear ye, hear ye This is  for you, you and meIt has been said“This place seems like only erotica as far as the eyes can see.”I say “No!”There is more to this place than thatPull up a chair and put...

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    Early Morning Fishing

    The sun struggles to rise The water is flat The stillness of the air Casting blindly Instinctively know where it lands Let it sink into the depths Invade a secret Slow movement  The soft under tow pulls A grip tightens Give and take increases Angle diverges One last powerful pull Culminating into...

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    Explaining to A Leaf (free verse)

    Explaining to A Leaf~ loneliness ~With winds stalking me,leaves tremble at my approach,they are afraid of the coldthat follows:and, in hushed rustling whispers,they ask, as I pass,“Why is it you’re not afraid?”Un-answering, my feet march on,trodding on their fallen...

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    • I’m hugely impressed with your understanding of poetic element.
      So, you are Richard the Rascal. Let me put that down. This is another amazing piece with emphasis on personification and symbolism. There’s obviously a metaphorical significance to the changing season, specifically fall to winter. It’s interesting to note that while you give leaves many characteristics of humans in this piece, they lack the unique capacity for understanding… at least, that’s the perspective of the speaker. Your final stanza is a fantastic summation.

      This is top shelf material, Richard.
      xoxo

      • Graciously spake, Dear Poetess🥂

        Your coaxing words are sweet as honeysuckle to a hopeful bard’s susceptible ear … most especially, from one so poetically accomplished and sophisticated as yourself.
        A few devices I tend to favor are color, texture, analogy, simile, and nature … I’m so pleased you’ve recognized their presence in this rather poignant little piece.

        Thank you ever-so warmly, Lady DK, for your always welcomed accolades! ⁓ Richard the Rascal🖌

    • Hi, M’Good Friend! ✌🏼

      How great it is, Tim, to be greeted here with one of your appreciatively expressed and inspiringly encouraging reviews, that always seems to grasp my poetry’s core essence.
      Yes, like You, I tend to enjoy a good dose of metaphoric imagery in my pieces.

      Thank you, Syr, for enjoying this rather sad Free Verse piece! ⁓ Rascal🖌

      PS: On your recommendation, I had to check the site out … do you know how one edits their poetry?

    • Graciously spake, Dear Poetess🥂

      Your coaxing words are sweet as honeysuckle to a hopeful bard’s susceptible ear … most especially, from one so poetically accomplished and sophisticated as yourself.
      A few devices I tend to favor are color, texture, analogy, simile, and nature … I’m so pleased you’ve recognized their presence in this rather poignant little piece.

      Thank you ever-so warmly, Lady DK, for your always welcomed accolades! ⁓ Richard the Rascal🖌

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