Thank you, Will
You inspired it.;))

Beautifully penned, Fia. This is an incredible write and I also dig your narrating voice my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Everything here is perfect. Well said and your voice is silky smooth. xo

Always have to rise from the hardships. It helps when you have somebody to motivate you.

Great ink

Nice challenge, Fia. May have to see what I can come up with. lol. Seriously, though this place is more than erotica. Appreciate you.

Damian

I think erotica may be the dominant force here but there are some great poems here that aren’t XXX.

You are making this very hard Fia .. come on… not even one S. ?!?!

If the front page had various categories including erotica that visitors or members could select….problem solved.
If you don’t like erotica don’t click it.

I am up for the challenge beautiful Fia ❤️

Yes it will be. 🫠

I’m here for all of it, the beautiful, the ugly, the suspenseful, the romantic, erotic and everything within.
Great spill Fia.

Hi Adira,
Sam and I will be modifying the home page so it will be easier for the readers and the writers to access the type of writing they wish to read. ;))

Okay then

Your fishing is different from mine.😉

I never knew fishing could be so much fun…

Brilliantly penned, Fia. This was a clever and sexy write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Catch anything?

Did you use bait? Hahaha
A beautifully written piece! “)

Sounds very therapeutic 😌 hehe

All I could do was smile at the cleverness of this allegorical vibe.
One of my favorite poetic alleys.
Sexy, sexy

Naaj

Oh that smile says a lot at the end.
Well done Fia.

I’m hugely impressed with your understanding of poetic element.
So, you are Richard the Rascal. Let me put that down. This is another amazing piece with emphasis on personification and symbolism. There’s obviously a metaphorical significance to the changing season, specifically fall to winter. It’s interesting to note that while you give leaves many characteristics of humans in this piece, they lack the unique capacity for understanding… at least, that’s the perspective of the speaker. Your final stanza is a fantastic summation.

This is top shelf material, Richard.
xoxo

Hi, M’Good Friend! ✌🏼

How great it is, Tim, to be greeted here with one of your appreciatively expressed and inspiringly encouraging reviews, that always seems to grasp my poetry’s core essence.
Yes, like You, I tend to enjoy a good dose of metaphoric imagery in my pieces.

Thank you, Syr, for enjoying this rather sad Free Verse piece! ⁓ Rascal🖌

PS: On your recommendation, I had to check the site out … do you know how one edits their poetry?

Thanks, Buddy👌

Graciously spake, Dear Poetess🥂

Your coaxing words are sweet as honeysuckle to a hopeful bard’s susceptible ear … most especially, from one so poetically accomplished and sophisticated as yourself.
A few devices I tend to favor are color, texture, analogy, simile, and nature … I’m so pleased you’ve recognized their presence in this rather poignant little piece.

Thank you ever-so warmly, Lady DK, for your always welcomed accolades! ⁓ Richard the Rascal🖌

This is a beautiful telling of what one feels towards another.

Wow! You’re a Wordsworth Rascal! Damn, you know how to melt a heart, don’t you? I’m a rhyme and meter girl with much of my poetry, so I appreciate the elegance of this piece despite its lack of contemporary appeal. The message is anti-materialistic and wholly wholesome with a massive slice of humility. You’re slipping in that age factor, that timeless long-lasting relationship that so many country songs emphasize.

It’s worth a roll in the hay any day, Rascal. Put a daisy in my hair.

xoxo

This is one of my favorite subjects, its a poem of sweet sincerity..

Thank you, Dear Poetess 🌈🍷

How delightful of you to pick one of my humble little pieces to read and leave such cozy words of compatibility.

A lovely flower for You 🌻 ⁓ Rascal🖌