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Read MoreThe Terror In The Community. The community was designed as a euphoric cornucopia of green, lush plant life, all underwater in a 25-gallon tank. Introducing into this tank were three. You heard me, three fanciful goldfish. One was an Oranda that...
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Thank you Damian. Maurice is going to have my blood pressure up. lol
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Fantastic. Love it, Fia.
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Thank you Atticus;))
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Why not just flush Maurice?? Get rid of the non team player! maybe he can go rule the sewers or something, LOL.
I’m just being logical! Or put his ass with a male Beta (Japanese Fighting fish). No more Maurice!-
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lol I have a friend that said I should send Maurice to meet Davey Jones Locker in the toilet too. lmao. Thank you Stxian
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Chère F.,
I’d love it if this would find you mellow and at ease, just before the weekend.I’ve read your poem and I don’t understand it.
blunt Dutch analysis.
But I love the kiss by Brancusi (singer museum Leiden the Netherlands) without understanding too.
I love some of Rothko’s work too.Understanding isn’t always about what you/I can grasp at any time!
I love this write of yours and I think it’s raking me a little more time.So:
Please be patient with me!
I’ll be back, I promise! Have a very nice weekend…..
Warm Waving from a distance, Gus-
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Thank you Gus, its not a poem its a short story. I have a goldfish that is a bully. lol Have a good weekend.
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Cook Maurice and have him as an appetizer. He’d be with you forever. Great story Fia.
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Lmao no way. thank you Vision
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This starts playful but slowly tightens into something darker.
Power and cruelty don’t need much space to show themselves.-
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That is so true Thomas. Thank you
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Clean slate works also. Lol
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Maurice met an untimely death. lol Thank you CasketSharpe;))
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I think you’ll need to build a little underwater jail and keep Maurice there as punishment.
This was great, yes it’s frustrating that your fishes kept dying but I love how you told this story not just as the observer but almost like a deity that you had power but they kept dying on you while you weren’t looking.
Awesome work.
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I found most of them cuz. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That’s great.;))
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cool idea!
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Thank you 😊 🩷
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Interesting
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Thank you ;))
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Damian was the one that stood out right away. Interesting, I don’t think I’ve seen a puzzle as a poem before.
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Thank you. I just wanted to have some fun with finding the writers in a puzzle.
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Fia Naturie posted in the group Music is Art
I wanted to post two versions of the same song to show, even if the music changes it is still a powerful write
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We had to change our original comment in recognition of your ability to say bodies slapping in an acceptable way. Hahaha, on the for real Lady we love it, it makes us think of slow love. Tight
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Haha you have me dying here, Thank you Me
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Laughter is positive energy Lady, enjoy every bit that comes your way
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This drifts between tenderness and urgent intensity, capturing the physical and emotional in a way that’s intimate without being flashy. I love how the language makes the body feel like both terrain and vessel, with every moment earned and alive.
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Thank you so much. Its not easy to write subtitles and take a person on a journey. Its a skill. Lol
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Passionately penned, Fia. Excellent write, you always deliver the goods my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, cuz, I want to write more of these but being upfront with what you want is perfect too
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Chère F.,
You are being rather harsh on yourself, labelling this as 17. Or you are living in a different part of the world.This kind of love making I learned/learnt from another beautiful lady.
I can only hope that I can get you to rub off on me the way to describe it the way you do.
This is almost French by nature. You can get away with most everything, as long as you mind your language.Needless to say I love it to bits!
Warm regards, Gus-
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Thank you, I called it We Delve not 17. lol Thank you for appreciating the subtlety of the poem.(almost French huh;))
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hello beautiful Fia so deeoly passionate I have felt this in my lifetime ❤️sexy and powerful write…
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Thank you, so much crimsin.
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Cleverly penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend, I always enjoy your amazing storytelling. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian