The way you write always leads me to multiple roads. Once feet start down one, the other appears & makes me pause

Intriguing. Were you the victim of your own pride?
Nice spill

haunting dearest Tim compelling write makes me want to know more ❤️

I like your unique imagery. The final line here is particularly intriguing.

Absolutely stunning in few words.
So raw and felt which opens so many doors of the soul. Lovely man, I feel your ache. ❤️

Powerfully penned, Tim. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Nice to see you CasketSharpe. A sexually intense piece of writing. Awesome poem.

Man oh man, this is deep!!
Read almost like Dante’s Inferno.
Very metaphorical and metaphysical
My type of vibe

Much respect

Naaj

I just put one out about her first born Diamond Storm of Dark Desire