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Thanks for the thoughtful comment Fia.
It’s not right and it’s not wrong , it’s just the way it is.Like everything in life,even suffering is impermanent.
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Quite moving..thank you for sharing
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I’ve often felt that pain is preferable to apathy. That quiet passing out of space. This haunts & hurts. So often the case, & always hard
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First the Technical: Excellent consistency with meter, beautifully executed rhyme.
Composition: Incredible depth. As Willow noted, the piece reflects a falling away, a loss of touch and intimacy with no explanation. It’s a death of sorts, and you’ve painted it perfectly. Really well done.
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Read More“Too much sanity may be madness and the maddest of all,to see life as it is and not as it should be.”CervantesIf asked to tell of loveI could tell nothingFor I am a foolBut without foolsLove would cease to...
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Really seems to be a struggle to get the formatting to stay the same. Strike two. 😠
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Lol, take two, and take three to get the picture aligned. I make simple things hard. Its a gift.
But more importantly, thank you for your sweet compliment. Fools are getting rarer but players are out there in record numbers. Nice to meet another of the vanishing breed. 🌼
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I swear to all things fuzzy, if I could get that bookmark function to work, this would be well & truly bookmarked! Amen & pass the bottle! Beautiful…
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And what a functionally challenged group we are! But I’ll take word for deed, and kindly hand you the flask. Thank you, dear Willow 🌼
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Thanks reading and sharing your thoughts. Its true, “Those that have it at any level are lucky and blessed.”
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Read MoreThe Mississippi Sex Terror rides again.Silver streak Rubiconmud-sling smilelate on the lease. I want a piece.That easy speaking crocodile,inches stretchfor miles at least.Piston pounding beast…Stick shift sentiment up my crease,pumping in the grease. Roll bar rough with a smooth release. How...
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This provoked a giggle or two!
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You know, I like to be provocative, Reggie. Thanks for reading!
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Cleverly penned, DK. Can’t go wrong sex and automotive speak. You’ll definitely attract the gear heads with this one. All you need is loud guitars screaming out the speakers. lol. Liked this a lot my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I wanted to pluck your strings, Damian. Now, give me that acoustic moan…
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Yeah, great flow! It feels like summer, wind playing with your hair and lots of weird thoughts on your mind! Great piece!
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It’s definitely a summer grind, girl. I have super weird thoughts. Thanks so much for reading!
xoxo
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Haha I loved this Meg! Flow especially. “Ball bearings deep” love it!
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Hey Daniel! I love to hear your favorite lines, ya know. Need a ride?
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Fuck yeah! 😉
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Slide on in
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E-mail me a ticket to Mississippi. If the woman look like that image down there, I’m sold! Great write Meg.
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You don’t need a ticket, baby. Just get in your jeep and drive down here. I’ll put on my shortest denims for you…
xoxo
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I don’t have a jeep! I guess I can steal one and drive out to you. My jeep & I will be quite dirty when I arrive. Do you mind if you give us a sudsy wash down wearing those short denims?
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I’ll wash you down after I take them off.
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Lemme at your Heme ….
Code for ass deepBIG STICK SHIFT …..LIKE
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Doors are open, Mr. Poet
Keys are in the ignition
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Tongue in your tailpipe…
xoxo
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Read MoreRough, Raw, Righteous Tongue presses deep—not a kiss, but conquest,a moan muffled in the mouth,a gasp stolen before it can rise. Fingers probe my moistness—not gentle, but knowing,with relentless intent,mapping every slick secret. My wrists pinned overhead—you are gravity,I am undone.Each breath...
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Sex should never be about love…..ask any other living creature.
Great work again🙏
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“Hips that open like scripture”
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My friend this is an erotic powerhouse written as only you can. Truly a masterwork of sensual composition. You take the sexual encounter to the level of pure instinctual joy. Love what you wrote here.
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Beautifully penned, LDF. A very hot write indeed my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreI love living a life in this inkpenning my words up to the brinkthe very edge of every pagecrafting poems salient and sage Burn my candle down to its wickwhile I pen within inks ever thickall across these thinnest of...
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Brilliantly penned, LDF. Fantastic write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Okay, that is gut-wrenching. To lay there and live a slow death that you did not sign up for. Not right at all.
This is executed well