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hello dearest John wow that’s a beautiful comment thank you graciously 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Great dark poetry my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously I deeply appreciate hearing from you… you make my day 💕
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Read More“In pussy I may have lucked-upBut in the end my life became fucked-up, “Maybe at many of those moments I should have had my nineFire in the hole, now a bitch could have had a real hot time, ...
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I appreciate this. There is a lot of truth in this poem many have or are going thru everyday.
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I understand completely
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Read MoreWhen you used to gaze into my eyes that was so beautiful... Then I could gaze back into those emerald gems... It wasn't the cute light of your soul, rather the beauty of your darkness... Since we broke up, my eyes still chase you through light...
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hello dearest Daniel this would make a great song…I’m sad I understand your darkness I have it myself I gave up long ago that the beings of light would except me… though in part I burn with the light… great write…💕
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Thanks as always, Brenda! Im still in the shadows gazing at her light… pretty lonely place…
Daniel
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I understand Daniel we are very different as you know… we can dream but never see her light better than yourself this is great beauty in the dark 💕
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Beautifully penned, Daniel. Love the depth of this write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreA scream of lightning and crash of thunder,illuminates the dark path ahead,and then I know the stormhad resuscitated my heart! But this storm ahead!Never have I seen suchgrey horizons for myself!Where the sun is faintin this fog of uncertainty. With trepidation...
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That is wonderful. I am totally here for it.
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Thanks, Fia. Im breezing through this new book. While juggling others haha. Soon I’ll be posting the first drafts…
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That is great.
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hello dearest Daniel beautifully dark I love a gothic atmosphere did you listen to my song grey day?💕
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No I have not. But I am going to definitely today. Can’t wait! I need to do audio on here too.
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Another incredible write my friend, I believe you will succeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Terrific write, just be careful that pain doesn’t become pleasurable.
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hello dearest Benny I understand what you mean my pain is beguiling thank you for the advise 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend, just keep moving forward. It’s easier said than done I know, but eventually the clouds will part, and let in the light. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian yesterday was just a hard day thank you for the words of encouragement 💕
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Moods often bring darkness that is hard to swallow.
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hello dearest Adagio thank you my friend for being here I hope you listened to the song 💕 it is haunting…
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I did.
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This is an emotional tour de force of dark poetry my friend. You captivate me with this darkly lit poem. A real work of art.
John