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hello dearest John bittersweet is love in my view thank you for the love on this ❤️
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Never got to read your writing….just couldn’t get past the image of that stunning woman you provided….lol
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hello dearest Benny yes she is stunning I was looking for a more mature woman to go with the poem thank you for your response I spend a lot of time for the right images ❤️
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Lovely, Brenda. Better to let go sometimes. Lovely!
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thank you graciously dearest Daniel I never really let go though ❤️
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Read MoreI have fallen in love with her,and I cannot stop my feelings. A rose blooms in our bed,blooming from a rainy summer. A white petal had fallen onto the bedcover,I picked it up, smelled it,and rubbed it on her lips.She still...
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Loved this so much Daniel. Enchanting and artfully crafted. I was mesmerized as the scene unfolded through your words.
John
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Beautifully penned, Daniel. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This read for me as an emotional sensual journey with such poignancy at the end. Truly deeply felt poetry at its finest.
John
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Passionately penned, Daniel. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I felt the burning of this piece. Well done!
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Read MoreForgive and forget Easy to say if you haven't been violated in some way.Forgiving is easier than forgetting, even though our memories of dreadful events are never 100% accurate, which is a good thing indeed. If we dont speak of...
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This whole thing speaks the truth. That last stanza is spot on Peter.;))
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Thanks Fia.
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Read MoreCandles within your eyes, illuming my shadow. Lonely in the dim I was, there is now a glow to follow.
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This short and I can’t help to say aww. This is sweet
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You know what I like about you, Daniel? You write and pour your heart out and couldn’t care less what others think or if you even get a nod or comment. You’re incredibly talented. Never stop being you.
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It’s how I’ve been living… pretty much in the shadow for a long time now. I refuse to analyze too many of other poet’s work and I don’t like there being too much rigid structure on writing. I write how I feel and in a fluid, bending structure that allows me to complete whatever piece I want the way I want it delivered to the world.
Thank you as always Alexandria,
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Esoteric and beautiful. The image you painted here was filled with passion and beauty. Enjoyed this much.
John
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Sorrowfully beautiful. Truly artistry in language that flows all the way until the end. You have a talent with words that is exquisite even in its sorrow. Fine art here, my friend.
John