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This poem is a vivid, honest look at desire – full of passion but also quiet vulnerability. The contrast between the “neon God” and “bluebirds” is striking and memorable.
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I feel these words. They are otherworldly, uttered from another world beyond the one we inhabit.
Kind regards
James
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First line fifth stanza, did you mean “summon”?
This was fascinating…and as Tim said…very spooky.
I love the idea of “stalking my vision”!
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. A very lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian