This is interesting. It has a turn of the century vibe to me for some reason. Like someone standing in a crowd, but the only person getting the whole scenario’s message from the one on stage. Your use of powerful words makes it impactful, but not bloated. Great job Crims.

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.

Damian

Wonderfully done, Wally. Your rhyme scheme is clever and precise. And the write flows very well. Plus the message itself is almost serene with it’s approach.
Awesome result.

Powerfully penned, Wally. Excellent write my friend per usual. Appreciate you.

Damian

I like this.

Excellent

thanks for reading.
regards
james