Powerfully penned, Adagio. Excellent storytelling my friend. Not gonna lie when I first saw the title I thought of, Creedence Clearwater Revival. Appreciate you.

Damian

Cleverly penned, Adagio. I met someone like that once, it’s a small world ain’t it? Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerfully penned, Adagio. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is very nice. A slow burn which gives you the feel of drinking whisky.

Passionately penned, Adagio. Nice write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Hoi @Damian,

Inspired on the artwork and your write:

een derde mond – plotseling
smaakte wat naar whiskey
tribal tattoo op haar dij
‘s intimite as can be

whiskey is geen verleiding
mijn teken van gevaar
‘t is anders als ik er af blijf
en alleen proef bij haar

And translated:

a third mouth – suddenly
tasted a bit like whiskey
tribal tattoo on her thigh
‘s intimate as can be

whiskey is not a temptation
my sign of danger
it’s different if I stay away from it
and only taste it on her

Yours is a lovely write and this is meant as a hats off to that. And you.
Kind regards, Gus

Thank you.

Hoi hoi A.,
There’s a theory that says that the first four sentences determine, if the reader wants to go on reading.
And the four of this poem take me by storm.

Never knew that there is a tong exactly the same as the Dutch Tong. Pronunciation the same as in Dutch too.

Ah well. Love the poem needless to say.
Kind regards, Gus

Thank you, Gus.

Powerfully penned, Adagio. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian