Sounds rough and sad to me at the same time.

Well now, Benjamin 🍷

Here, in this gobsmacking piece, is the exact point of issue I was making when you mentioned being “an undisciplined Free Verse poet” … there’s nothing about this poem but an excellent use of skillful poetic devices to command the reader to halt, proceed, imagine, and “feel” every moment, twist, turn, and diversion into your wondrously rendered world of abstract, mind-bending ambiguation, and I say this while sitting here bulge-eyed and jaw-dropped, not only from your phantasmagorical diction of verbosity, but how you’ve used white-space to create mood and imagery, while capturing and holding your readers’ spellbound attention.

Sheesh, M’Friend, it’ll take awhile to shake this one from my consciousness!
Good, really GOOD stuff, Syr Poet! Thanks for the rare experience! ⁓ Richard🖌

I feel this piece. Nice

I hear that man. Cool write.

thank you beautiful Fia sounds exciting ❤️

Thanks, Fia. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian

Wow Krumpus is beheaded. A just killing. Nice Nick

Powerfully penned, Nick. Excellent storytelling in this write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

It came from that sky, and she was not scared straight. lol Nypho she is.

This is one extraordinary piece of XXX. Love it! This deserves a bookmark! Great job on captivating the detail and imagery.

Cleverly penned, Nick. Cosmic porn vibe. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian