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    libido

    insulted lust craving you in the momentacess denied so cruellycarelessly I did the same so many timesjilted desire to burn and it not be returnedshifty need so fickle now you're painfully aware of what my body can dowithout provocation...

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    • Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Chère C.,
      On DUP my nom de plume was Jilted Johnny.
      Not practical, because on SoundCloud the seemed to be somebody with the same name.
      I like it that you use Jilted in this very beautiful new poem of yours.

      Love it a lot. The artwork too.
      An awful lot.
      Warme groeten, Gus

    • hi dearest Gus you honor me with your presence thank you my friend and jilted I can’t see it I deeply appreciate your thoughts ❤️

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    ...the moon drags tides

    With a pulse of cello and scent of cognac,a lingering want as the moon drags tides, like a metronome with fingers.Then—silence—the breath before the fall, like a piccolo whispering a symphony,with a single note.Exhaling the taste of yesterday's tobacco,...

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    Blackbird On The Wire

    A phone call now may wake her  straddle waking dreams to the hymen-ever-after  once upon a sleeping crime nothing rhymed    ....and the moon is a voyeur’s pearl  stringing whispers to sky balustrade    A phone call now may wake her  strip negligee to bone  dribble honey thru pillow hives  flood hornets’ nest between legs    ...and I’ll sail this sleep...

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    • Many times writes are over my head, like this one. LOL. I’m pretty good at deciphering poems, etc. Yet some are more complex and perhaps “inside” than I can travel to. But, pixie sticks poems have kept many a reader caught up in the meanings, looking for that connection with the author. It is a bond formed of our mental values. Of what we grasp for, as writer and reader. You make a hell of a spider.

      • Thanks Mark. Sometimes metaphor and images over-power the meaning and think this is such a case. It’s really testament to how an unexpected phone call can change life’s narrative.

        A spider? Ha. I could certainly do with 8 legs at moment. Broke the same ankle thrice and in the cold weather walk like a penguin with flatulence.

    • Oh motherfuck YES, this is goddamn poetry. I needed to get my head out of my own ass and breathe some air, and you, my sweet Welsh friend, are cold wind on a warm day.

      The way you fuck a line, gods, with lube and soft kisses and hair pulls.

      You weave a poem and use an unexpected trope-twist to make real magic. I’m reminded of why I word-crush on your shit.

      THE FUCKING LANGUAGE…

      straddle waking dreams to the hymen-ever-after

      AND THIS?! Fuck you. I’m literally jealous I didn’t write it…

      ….and the moon is a voyeur’s pearl
      stringing whispers to sky balustrade

      THIS?! AAAAARRRHHH!
      strip negligee to bone

      I’m almost over-stimulated and about to cuss you out for being brilliant but this?!

      sea-shell coved against my ear
      like a seance with the deaf

      …. that was amazing

      I wish I hadn’t quit smoking.

      Kickass shit.

      BB

      • Well Betty Boo, such praise from a writer like yourself, keeps my keyboard warm in middle of night.

        Not everyone gets me (so to speak) but I’m cool with that. It’s enough that the poets and people I hugely respect, give a considered nod to my scribbles.

        I’m yearning to visit Snowdonia (Eryri in Welsh). It has proved to be the most cathartic landscape.

        Keep the faith

        Rob x

    • Dear R,

      The energy of night passion jumps off the page in this piece. Two lovers trying desperately to make it happen without consequence of hurting others. The romance of the ocean in the back ground is hot and (al)luring. I really enjoyed the beauty, intensity and sexy shivers in this poem. H 🌷

      • Oo. Diolch H. You get it. The night tells all – there are reasons why my pillows are frayed.

        Even as a fiftysomething, I take great pleasure in scratching names in the sand. Last week I took a night walk to sing to the harbour lights – ignoring the bitter cold and manic screech of the junkies. The sea was so calm.

        Rob x

    • Hauntingly, up my alley…fantastic!

    • Powerfully penned, Ghosteen. Excellent write with great storytelling my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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