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Read Moreour fatherwho art in Mar-a-lagoand DC when it suits oh radiant in goldand flag stitched thunderoh crowned in the noise of your merciless namehallowed be the mouththat makes decreedisguised as savin gracethy kingdom comeon the backs of mencarryin the...
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I agree with Fia. The image is designed to infuriate. But the poem is fire! I read somewhere that it will be standing room only for miles for people waiting to piss on his grave
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Your poem certainly is of a creative thought. Critical thinking; there is no way to reconcile the image and his own explanation/interpretation. He certainly doesn’t have a Doctorate degree (I looked it up). However, I can honestly say he does have a BS degree.
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“blessed be the flow
oil and blood
run side by side
thick with profit
pulled from the ground
pulled from the body
both claimed
and spent the same”Powerfully penned, 253. Excellent write with clever wordplay my friend. So many killer lines in this write, but the stanza above was fire brother. He’s way out over his fucking skis. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Willow posted in the group National Poetry Month
Roack-a-bye, Baby
I know no other way
the weight of his absence presses
aching…waiting…
begging for his return
as nights close in
shadow draping me in yearning
the remembrance nearly blistering
moments of fierce and desperate
thundering of twin beats
throb piercing me
and I cannot…will not…forget
saturation a constant
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Read MoreI know no other way the weight of his absence presses aching...waiting... begging for his return as nights close in shadow draping me in yearning the remembrance nearly blistering moments of fierce and desperate thundering of twin beats throb piercing me and I cannot...will not...forget saturation a constant as darkness falls summoning...
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I feel this hunger and need. I like this.
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Thank you, Fia 😊
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Long distance can be urgent in the extreme. But it’s so worth the wait. Thank you, Brenda 🧡
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Dear W,
Dang girl. This sizzler is well balanced with thoughtful hotness but not vulgarity. You let the reader envision what they want/need with passion and depth of feeling. There are visuals that lead us along while creating emotional ties of love and lust. The best of all balances. Great write. H🌷
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Hey Honoria
It’s good to see you. Thank you so much 😊
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It totally is worth the wait:)
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Truth! Thank you, Adelphina 😊
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Passionately penned, Willow. The words sizzle in their longing my friend. Excellent write. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Some days it’s the sizzle that dominates. Thank you, my friend 😊
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Read MoreDear listeners, An older coop this time. And a very interesting coop as well, if I may say so. Kozo wrote the lyrics. And what a beautiful place of work it is. She knew, with wisdom beyond her age, that with...
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Hi
I really liked how you expressed the hurricane Katrina, I was in Beaumont when it hit. I was doing my Masters.
How much do you manage. For me life with husband is most prestigious because he enters the life after we become adult. And parents are always with you in any terrible situation. Kids stay with us still we end. I was in depression yesterday why i am suffering i see my own happiness in that suffering which has become routine.
Jessy Jacob ❤️
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Hi U.,
Hope this finds you well.
Thank you for your kind hearted reply!
Hope your Wednesday will be beautiful and sun shiny!
Kind regards, Gus
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Hi Gus,
I listened to this in my car during lunch today!
The guitar in this is amazing, the whole song really.
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Chère A.,
Lovely to hear from you!A small technical hiccup prevents me from doing what I promised.
To post our coop.
A few days patience and I’ll have solved it.Don’t worry. Your vocals are just fine!
This is an older coop.
And a very successful one too.
It has harvested some 16.000 listens, part of it pre Covid.Kozo asked to rattle windows and doors. And I loved doing my best to get that effect.
Grateful for your time to listen and reply.
Warm greetings from Springlike (at long last) Amsterdam, Gus
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This is amazing you two. OMG I love it
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Chère F.,
Sorry:
I don’t like contradicting you, but:
Lyrics: Kozo Pinkwillow
Voice: Chris Spruit
Backing and mixing: GusMay I ask you to ask me (as Drieks opened one of her fantastic songs) what I would love to be possible in StarsRite?
That’s a corner for real (not AI) self written songs. Or coops between StarsRite writers? Like this one.
With the tsunami of other posts in audio & video, coops like this disappear in no time from the radar.And some songs like the upcoming and lovely one with Adelphine deserve a better fate.
Thank you for your listen and your work for StarsRite!
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Hi Gus, sorry for my assumption. the song is still amazing. Since the site is growing, we will discuss adding more to the site. It does take time. We take all request and suggestions seriously.;))
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D. Ignatov and
redbrick Keshner are now friends
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First off, that picture is rage bait if ever I seen it. No, he is not Jesus! 253 the poem had me in stitches because to put it in a prayer form and showing us exactly what he is doing is just comical that no one wants to see it.