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hello Willow thank you graciously this is for a friend who was in my day to day just pure magic I don’t get to see her everyday now but I wanted her to know how much I missed her…she is kind of a gypsy though we stay in touch on FB… I’m happy you liked this 💕
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This melodic music and words are beautiful
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hello lovely Fia I hope you’re having a great afternoon thank you graciously this lady is now of a kind…you are too I can tell beautiful 💕
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. This is an amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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good morning dearest Damian thank you graciously I appreciate you deeply 💕
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hello dearest Steven thank you graciously for such a beautiful comment and for seeing my poetry though dark part of the heavenly realms it’s deeply appreciated 💕💕
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Read MoreI could write him a love poembut if I get it right...you wouldn't recognize it ...not for what it really was none of those butterfly wings ...tickling the tummyno sweet comparison to cotton candy nah...it's nothing like that when he says my name...I go...
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Sounds like a harmonious relationship to me. Good write 🌼
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It’s a gift beyond measure. Thank you
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hello beautiful Willow a very sexy and passionate write I understand about him alone having the key but in my case it is of a divine origin my man that you have such in the flesh is beautiful 💕
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It’s so beautiful that I have no words. Thank you, beautiful 🧡
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Beautifully executed. I love how you say it is not recognized by butterfly wings
Not everyone will see the key.
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Not everyone is meant to. That’s why there’s only one. Thank you
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Beautifully penned, Willow. Into the book it belongs! Love the layers in this piece, your writes are authentically you my friend. I’m a huge fan, amazing work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I wouldn’t even know how not to be authentic at this point. Good or bad, I am what I am. Who knows where it will go next? Thank you, my friend
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I don’t need butterflies, honestly. What we have is more powerful than their fragile wings. Thank you, girl
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This is so so smooth, exciting and textured. I love it!, Ain’t nothing like having your own🌹
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Nope, there isn’t. Thank you 😊
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This vibe is so, so sensual and moving. The connection….so deep and meaningful.
Just exquisite!!
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Thank you, my friend
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Read MoreReading the room reveals a clue It takes concentration to observe Ghosts of the past in the rearview Another deadman found his nerve Once inside it’s difficult to leave Too many loose ends unravel lies Can’t get dirty and remain naive Tactical spider still collecting flies Planting...
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I think about the consequences of opening my mouth & weigh them against the burden of saying nothing. If it has the potential to hurt someone, I keep it locked in the Nope folder. There’s a lot of insight in this one. That cautionary note…think before you speak…is never out of date, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I always try to think before I speak. Sometimes that means biting my tongue, I like to choose the hills I’m willing to die on. Always enjoy your commentary. Appreciate you.
Damian
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No you can not stay naive. Especially when you already was a part of it.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Exactly, also can’t play the victim when found at the scene of the crime. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian you are very deep… I’ve picked up on a lot of wisdom in you… the air can help but be heavy with the words… truth is just like that 💕well done…
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you, that means a lot to me, such a wonderful compliment. It’s really just being true to how my brain is wired. I’m a deep thinker who likes puzzles. lol. Your support has meant a lot as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Learning to “read the room” is such a great line, and your last is filled with wisdom. We live and we learn as we go learning from our past mistakes and learning from others.
Great poem.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It was a cool line. Wisdom is gained over time, I totally agree. Appreciate you.
Damian
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The dark side of the king of cups. I feel this in every pore, in the deepest recesses of my being. A powerful write! Your skill with free verse is admirable.
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Read MoreDoesn’t pledge come before promise,And promise before reward?And before these must come the hintThe touch before the word.***In the cool of the evening as the long shadows fallWe walk closer in the fading lightYour hand first touchesThen slips in...
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Its the moments that lead to the exclamation point that give everything context. Live in the moment 🌼
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There’s a touch of apprehension and romantic expectation that happens I’m familiar with. It’s that little rush of excitement that brings a flush to the skin. You’ve seized on that to me with this poem in all your details. Very well done.
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Thank you. Romanticism is a dying art. Don’t know if I’m reviving it in the least, but I enjoy the effort.
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My sensual Joe,
your words, your words has me intensely yearning ❤️
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All long to feel as if we’re the consummate measure of desire. Yearning is good for the imagination.. What is imagined can be 🌼
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Brenda, this is breathtakingly beautiful 🧡