hello beautiful Fia this is very passionately seductive ❤️

Passionately penned, Fia. Another excellent write my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

Anticipation causes as many heart attacks as does the activity! The pressure verses the release can be extremely volatile!
Unless of course I’m so reading into this write the wrong way? NOT! lol

“Cruelty hides within a fractured observation

So much disconnect fuels everyday frustration”

Yes.. yes this had me nodding my head. I like how you created this.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, PAR. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’m blown away as always by your supportive commentary brother and it really means a lot me. I’m just sharing the lessons learned from my journey in this life. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Clay. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you so much for your continued support it really means a lot to me. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’ve been rhyming for so long as a writer that it’s become muscle memory. I don’t write many free verse poems because no more than I pen a couple of stanza’s I’ve already started rhyming without even thinking about it. lol. By that time I like what I got already, so why go back and take out the rhymes and lose the plot. I don’t count syllables because I’m too lazy for one thing and I always write while listening to music, so I guess I’m following the drummer. Or my wife thinks I follow my heartbeat which I guess could be the case, since I have wrote without listening to tunes it’s just not very often. Appreciate you.

Damian

I bet you feel so much better now this is out here and presumably doing the rounds .. well penned my literary friend .. Neville

I think it’s funny how everyone (including me) noticed the perfect rhyme schemes.

Favorite lines: Everyone’s got a story what’s yours?

He’s unable to read between the lines

Looking different behind closed doors

She’s left all alone where hatred dines

Jealousy can tear two people apart as easy as a bird tears the limbs of a mouse.

Another fine poem, Damian.

There is so much in this one, and too many amazing lines to quote. This is a masterpiece in subtle storytelling, if one pays attention. That question of what’s your story carries a lot more weight than meets the casual eye. Because how do you answer that? My sweetie always says “Be more specific? I could answer from a dozen different angles, all truth, and still not answer what you’re asking.” Another incredible piece, my friend

That opening line is an attention grabber.
I’m loving these with the couplets and rhyme scheme.
Excellent work sir.