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Read Moredarkly I come daring you to see meresist the urge to touchmy cold would burnsalacious thoughts draws us togetherbut darlin I'm not prettypain overflows and makes me jealousa quality I resentquietly I listen to your thoughtsyou're a woman's manI...
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this is just fantasy dearest Jim I thank you though for reading and leaving a comment ❤️
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Fantasies can be darn near real, right? 🙂
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sometimes ❤️
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Phenomenal write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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good morning dearest Damian thank you graciously ❤️
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“…blow your heart to bits” genius work dear. 😉
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thank you dearest Jim this is from my imagination I wouldn’t aspire to do as such just the way I’m feeling right now thank you ❤️
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Sure, I get it. Fiction is real in our minds, at times. 🙂
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really I just write whatever comes to mind so I don’t stifle my muse then there is my bipolar too to consider… so sometimes what I write is kooky lol ❤️
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It’s a great self-therapy tool I think. I write for that reason sometimes too. I feel better today, not 100% yet, but well on my way. 💖🙏
For me my fantasy world fulfills me in a few good ways.
Be well Ms C.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read Moresynthetic love patheticfeelings made of plasticrealistically inclined what do you know about fantasyconnecting with your depthssoul of souls realizing loveit is with deep affection I talk to youfaulty need to pleaseassaulting my pridedisaterous beauty inside desire's whimblame the dreamsmy...
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Sweet darkness.
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thank you dearest Jim I was really off yesterday I’m happy you liked this one ❤️
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Me too – in my own way. ‘Hope you’re on today. 🙂
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thank you Jim I hope you are feeling better today too ❤️
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian ❤️
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twofiftythree posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
hopin to receive partial credit for late assignments…
swore under oath
rationality
face down hands cuffed to my tongue
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Love it, Dru
Excellent, in every sense of the word: counts, directives, and intent in following in the spirit that one of the truly tangible facets of what the Senryu is meant to convey.
For me, your Senryu literally strives to express needed fervor for acceptance and the strife to be trusted and believed-in, even though the opposite may appear…Read More
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Read MoreI am not the sunrise but I should be I should be a cascade of wind an unfinished scent the geometry of words starting a fresh poem allowing the lines on my face to tell it all leak the shade of grief I should be an ounce of...
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This is tender. A nice tribute to her. Sorry for your loss.
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Thanks Fia.
This was actually the last ever poem she wrote before the morphine, methadone and chemo took hold of her skull. She was very popular in DU. The truth lies on her death bed and with her children – but as I scribbled in the summary, deluded narratives prevented you all to say a proper goodbye. A huge fucking shame and shameful.
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Lovely sad beautiful poem.
Thanks for posting 🙏
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Thank you. All plaudits to the author, who sadly, was taken way too young.
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Best of luck dear – I truly hope that this happen very soon for you.