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Read MoreIt was you who brought a blade into our bed peeled the skin from grenades beyond barbed wire, torniquet fingered, but the only person bleeding was me From the Jubilee Line to Trafalgar Square you sweated love apartheid into my p(s)alms, how could you be...
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Hello, to edit, go to the dashboard, then click on the blue pen. then you can edit your work
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This sounds like the pain he felt was caused by her not caring. You cared more so you wrote about it. Nicly penned.
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It’s good to read your material again. Some writers whack me upside the head with their weighty words. And I don’t mind a bit. It makes me think. It makes me curious. That’s the best drug to me: Curiosity. So thank you for feeding us this drug of yours.
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Thank you Fia. In a nutshell, your interpretation is correct
Cheers Mark. I miss ‘chatting’ to the likes of Gary and your good self. For some reason (prob my IT incompetence) I can’t expand my messages on here. I’ll send my email.
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Dear R,
The desolation of being the person who loves more with little, or worse, no return affection is the curse of the one damned for eternity. Having been there this write is very impactful. H🌷
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so sorry to read this resonates. beyond cyber madness I send the greatest hug. oo, you get to smell my latest aftershave too. sauvage. lol
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Read MoreThe falcon soars unlike ever beforeThy enamel stainedThy index fadedFight our battlesEvermore be hatedWhoever might take me will burn to ashesMy legacy's kept until the close will catch us Keep me saneI'll save my soul for youAll that I doI...
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Drieks I love the beat that went this piece. I can easily put this on my music list.
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So happy you enjoy it Fia!
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Read MoreI would be telling you a lie if I stated that I did not need a night out with my friends. Work is the usual hectic mess that it is. The peace and serenity I crave at home have...
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hello lovely Fia good evening you are an excellent story teller this is sexy and fun while being thrilling too 💕
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Thank you crimsin. That is so kind of you to say. I hope you like the rest of the story.
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. Amazing write, you’re a fantastic storyteller my friend. Dig this, cuz. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you;)) cuz
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very nice. lookin forward to next part.
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Thank you Ambjr;))
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Read MoreReturning on a jet plane... (Paul Harvey used to give "...the rest of the story" on the radio. The same radio played songs that gave us a glimpse into song character's lives but are never revisited! Even worse when the...
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This is good. I never thought of it needing a return trip. Enjoyed this
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Crimson …nothing is permanent ever.Not joy,not sorrow but despair makes it seem like it will.
Shadows crawl beneath the skin,
where even light cannot seep in.
Hope decays in midnight air
and then despair ignores your prayer.Take care🙏
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hello dearest Benny I love your poem response thank you very much indeed 💕
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Not sure how to edit a submission, but somehow, in internet madness, the pen ultimatum stanza was omitted. As if anyone gives a fuck!
submarines tightly knotted in our gulf
diving for my very existence
when I should have been diving for pearls