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Hi Richard,
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oops didn’t mean to send that too short of a reply. I read your paper? instructions about the nature of and what constitutes a formally written English Sonnet. I am afraid I have only ever attempted one. If I can find it I will post in the “Back To Poetry Basics” group. This group was mented to me by Valuptas Whispers Unholy. and then I saw Fia’s…Read More
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C’mon, Curt, join-in. There’s nothing like taking advantage of an opportunity when it present itself, and it’s FREE! With your creative talents, it would be most thrilling to read your version of a proper Sonnet, and then you’ll know how from then on. : )
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NIIIIICCCCCCCEEEEEEEEE!
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Read MoreMissed Opportunity Back in the day... She first saw him at the mall buying clothes. He noticed her the first day of school. She liked his hair and smile. He thought, she doesn't hang in cliques...cool! Smart and pretty! They were both...
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Tragic. Well written, nicely done!
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Thank you so much! It means the world to me. Truly. 💕
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Very cool! Hey we like you via your writes! You have a lot going on in your head, so therefore you are not boring right? LOL
I like how you search for what works for you, creativity wise. It reads well as a poem, and then the boom as a song.
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Thank you for your kind words Styxian! It means a lot to me.
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Truly enjoyed the read then when I reached the bottom and pushed play, it completely elevates your write. Honestly, I enjoy reading first and thinking about how it will sound when I push play
at the bottom. It’s like the music aspect is desert after the meal/read lol
Hope that makes sense.
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Thank you so much Adelphina! It does make sense yes! I really appreciate you 🙏🏻
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hello dearest Drieks we need hope and no one likes me don’t feel bad…it doesn’t matter what circle I’m in I don’t fit one on one I do great in groups not at all… ps I like you I just have failed to comment much of late… this write you should be proud of ❤️
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Such kind words Crimsin 🙏🏻 this means the world to me. Thank you ❤️
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“I’m the echo in a room that never speaks
Nobody likes me
Because there’s nobody like me
I’m the secret even silence couldn’t keep.”Powerfully penned, Drieks. Excellent lyrics per usual my friend. That chorus above, next level wordplay! Once again your arrangement highlights your words. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That means a lot coming from you Damian 🙏🏻 Thank you!
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Oh, my god this is so good! I just played this so my wife could hear you again (and me) and it is just phenomenal! And what an incredible voice! Give her some love, girl. Plus the music and arrangement, everything is top notch!
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Read MoreHIT BY A TRUCK(This is Joe's true story. 11/4/11.)He left work at rush hour. He had tocash his paycheck and get home. They needed food and diapers. Money was tight. He couldn't afford a car. He walked.Down the street...
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The world is filled with Joe’s and Joelines.
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I knew him and his wife 2 years before his accident and I just recently ran into him and we caught up. Where are the happy endings? I’m not seeing them. Everyone has a rough time, now.
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Hi, Redzone! I welcome you to “BACK TO POETRY BASICS” and would like to invite you to join-in on our Sonnet lesson (below). It’s easy: just read and follow along. I look forward to sharing with you. ⁓ Richard🖌