This is beautiful, simply beautiful, dear Fia – your words and your voice!

Perfection here. This was executed really well.

Beautifully penned & narrated, Fia. Excellent work my friend per usual. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you for the invitation, dear Fia! I’m on my way! I

Love this. Another great piece Fia.

Beautifully penned & performed, Fia. Amazing work my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian

You are such a strong woman, Brenda. Many don’t hesitate to lash out and slash those wronging them. But you know the power of words. 🧡

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Words are weapons and writers know how to use them, showing restraint takes self discipline. Especially against those who provoke us. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

I can absolutely relate to your poem, dear Crimsin. The strong wish not to hurt anybody makes sensitive people think that they have caused a conflict and are simply not lovable. Never forget that your loving heart and the power of your words are a most effective weapon and armor. Great work!

An eye for an eye brings no satisfaction, the loss still exist and nothing can replace it. Tight

The title got me. The way you wove the bible in this but end it with the drink being labeled ‘What Price Salvation?’ is a damn moment. Good read

This reminds me of the late 60s – early eighties writers. Yes, I’ve read that far back.LOL. My dad loved the old classics, while my sister came to poetry during the 70s. So I saw a great many styles and such.
Almost goes with LSD, this. Seriously! I don’t condone illegal drugs, ahem, yet in moderation many ideas have sprouted for many many writers.
You write on another level, my good man.

Brilliantly penned, Ghosteen. This is truly an amazing write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian