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Read MoreOur world as we know ittwisted brick by brickA world so twisted we kill our healthy and heal our sick Against our mother, pro all nature we bleed with vile religious crazeAll for war-induced pharmaciesin a 2 feet blinding maze This...
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Thank you for reading and listening! 🙏
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Epically penned, Drieks. Excellent lyrics with a powerful message and being a rock/metal guy I love the arrangement. Nicely done my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian!
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I’m truly blown away by this.
I’m reading it as I’m listening to the audio clip.
This is a talented piece of art.
So articulate in its own way. I love it! x
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Thank you so much for your kind words Rosie! It really means a lot 🙏🏻
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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I found most of them cuz. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That’s great.;))
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cool idea!
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Thank you 😊 🩷
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Interesting
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Thank you ;))
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Damian was the one that stood out right away. Interesting, I don’t think I’ve seen a puzzle as a poem before.
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Thank you. I just wanted to have some fun with finding the writers in a puzzle.
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Read MoreIntimacy left the bedroom, drifted quietly down the street. Wanting only human closeness, with no intent to cheat. It wandered past the neighbours, took a shortcut through the park. Noticed couples leaning inwards, who had not lost their spark. It walked backed twenty paces, sat beside a nameless...
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Cleverly penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian…..watch out for those Gnomes.
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I love the idea of this, the imagery. The whole gnome part almost, but not quite, adds a whimsy to it. Yet the despair overcomes that brief slide towards “not so bad”. The ending is perfect. The whole write is great stuff.
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Cool write Peter. Very creative.
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Read Moretwinning knots of expression, winding themselves together on the atmospheresouls of no regard, gifting each other passiondeeply reaching into the wealth of the heartfinding thereselves in one anothers eyesfruition of desire long repressedcomes slowly but with a fierce strengthoddly...
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously for the love here ❤️
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I love the way you put this story together. A love intertwined.
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hello beautiful Fia good evening thank you graciously for such a lovely comment ❤️
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Read Moreit was the immaculate conception inconceivable as it was me being birthed from the womb of man's ideology...motherless never nurtured from the essence of her femininity an umbilical cord just a figment of my sentimental imagination i arrive as a prophet in my own right and though i...
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Hahaha, the transition from the giver of life to the taker, from the peacemaker to the shit starter. The power of making a coward a brave individual, with the right plan a beggar could live comfortably. We want to discuss this with you soon, tight
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Yep. This is how it is. Cowards becoming bullies though access to firearms.
Conflict resolution takes on a different meaning. Big thx or the commentary, broMuch respect
Naaj
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Brilliantly penned, Naaj. This is a powerful write my friend, I dig the layers and incredible storytelling brother. This is next level good, much respect sir. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Glad you dug the layers, bro. This is an ongoing conversation in my head
that I tried to unpack without rambling.Big thx and much respect
Naaj
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I would have never imagined thinking of a firearm this way. I love the way you kept writing it in a verse of the testament as if you scribing it into the book
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Fia, the way you read was the way it lowed and yes…there is a book in my mind in regard to this topic [gun violence]
I’m glad you enjoyed chapter oneMuch respect
Naaj
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Incredible write. Totally captivating for the reader. It is bold but not violent. It simply speaks of the potential for…
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Yeah I dug this one up as a conversation piece. Glad you enjoyed the journey
Much respect
Naaj
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Man, I hate guns! Loud popping sounds in general trigger me a bit. I remember a time when we fought with bats, bricks, and small knives. Some were good with their fists. My main criticism about self-defense with a gun is that some idiot will pull that sucker in a panic and shoot himself or some bystander. A lotta folks don’t even consider that. There was a time when only specialized warriors held that kind of fear & respect. Now any ol’ fool can be a serious danger. The Devil’s world in a nutshell. Great topic!
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As always we read the piece first, then wondered what it would sound like. You never disappoint Lady, this is tight, that first stanza screams