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Curly Grace posted in the group National Poetry Month
Dust Before the Storm
The warning didn’t come
with sirens or lights.It came quietly,
a shift in the air,
a stillness settling
like dust before a storm.The horses grew restless,
pacing the fence line,
ears toward something
I could not yet see.Even the cows
lifted their heads,
watching the horizon
as if it held
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redzone posted in the group National Poetry Month
Diversity
Being a city boy
with Native roots,
I have always loved the feel
of cool, dew-laden grass
licking my toes;
the scent of pine needles
on the forest floor;
the way a blue butterfly
will sometimes land
on your outstretched hand.
As I wrap all these thoughts
inside my heart,
I begin to see the balance of life.
We are, all of…Read More3 Comments-
Very good…. I love this part the way a blue butterfly
will sometimes land
on your outstretched hand.
As I wrap all these thoughts… A beautiful metaphor.. like if a butterfly can sense our thoughts . I do feel they sense those things too. Nice work… Keep it up-
Thanks Navina, I am glad you found this poem enjoyable. It means a lot and I appreciate your comment
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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hello beautiful Fia this is very passionate something about the undertones were menacing or I’m reading it wrong powerful emotions ❤️
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Excellent write with passion and power my friend. Nicely done as always, great read. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Nice! Simple and direct. The best kind of poetry for any day. I like that you chose to write this, and post it. Awesome!
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Absolute commitment to another. Knowing you were created for them, the person of your choice, to be taken in ways that the world will never understand, nor do you care that they understand. If the other knows what love and heated passion is about, you shouldn’t have to wait long.
A very honest piece of writing, using precise words to deliver your wants, needs, and desires.
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Beautiful, made me think of Dorothy in Kansas . Lovely write keep it up❤️