hello dearest Soul soldier and beautiful Willow you two are as real as they come soul to soul body to body ❤️

Beautifully penned, Naaj & Willow. A very steamy collaboration indeed, you two. Appreciate you, both.

Damian

This blended so well and this is heat on heat. Love it Nicely done you two;))

Thank you from the both of us, Adira
We really appreciate your wonderful sentiments

Always a pleasure hitting the poetic dance floor with you. Let me catch my breath & I’ll go another round anytime!

Big thx from the both of us, Duende!! We’re always appreciative of your insights
🤗🤗

I read this a couple times and it got more vivid each time as the complexities became more clear, very nice treat of a read..

Powerfully penned, Nick. These words are of the lyrical flavor my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerfully penned, Nick. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

I’m hugely impressed with your understanding of poetic element.
So, you are Richard the Rascal. Let me put that down. This is another amazing piece with emphasis on personification and symbolism. There’s obviously a metaphorical significance to the changing season, specifically fall to winter. It’s interesting to note that while you give leaves many characteristics of humans in this piece, they lack the unique capacity for understanding… at least, that’s the perspective of the speaker. Your final stanza is a fantastic summation.

This is top shelf material, Richard.
xoxo

Hi, M’Good Friend! ✌🏼

How great it is, Tim, to be greeted here with one of your appreciatively expressed and inspiringly encouraging reviews, that always seems to grasp my poetry’s core essence.
Yes, like You, I tend to enjoy a good dose of metaphoric imagery in my pieces.

Thank you, Syr, for enjoying this rather sad Free Verse piece! ⁓ Rascal🖌

PS: On your recommendation, I had to check the site out … do you know how one edits their poetry?

Thanks, Buddy👌

Graciously spake, Dear Poetess🥂

Your coaxing words are sweet as honeysuckle to a hopeful bard’s susceptible ear … most especially, from one so poetically accomplished and sophisticated as yourself.
A few devices I tend to favor are color, texture, analogy, simile, and nature … I’m so pleased you’ve recognized their presence in this rather poignant little piece.

Thank you ever-so warmly, Lady DK, for your always welcomed accolades! ⁓ Richard the Rascal🖌