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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Okay, I am stuck with this, but I am trying.
Was born with eyes wide open
To be prepared for the truth
No one seemed to care or wanted to offend
What had happened on the roofTime withholds memories in a box
We crawl, then stand, and eventually walk
As a rusty key enters an unforgiving lock
Uttering words before learning to talk6 Comments-
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I am going to. By next week it should be better.
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![Profile picture of RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS]()
I hope so … the topic is very interesting, if you can get it into proper Sonnet format. : )
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I’m trying
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For examples, you might read and study some of my posted sonnets, applying what you’ve learned from the lesson to become a bit more familiar with the Sonnet format … you should have it down by next week’s session. It doesn’t have to be perfect, just show a basic understanding we can build on.
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okay
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Read MoreHIBERNATIONI have a windowless closetin my apartment that Isometimes lock myself inand use it as a deprivation chamber.I know that sounds weird butit shuts me off from all stimuli.Locks are on the inside.I have my knife with meI use...
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Closets and cemeteries are nice places for isolating yourself from the outside world.
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Paula
This is a similar themed piece to one I’ve been trying to write for ages.You’ve done a great job asking question about the decisions we make.
We both know every action starts with a thought and that’s where the mind comes into play.If we’re fully awake and listening,our minds will see what the consequences of our actions will be.
I for one try to remember “no harm to any sentient being”, not always easy do.
I believe if a person’s intentions are good then, regardless of the law or societal norms, their actions are good.I’ve preached enough, when all I wanted to say was….great write.
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Thanks
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Read MoreFALL CAR RIDEI was about 8 yrs old...Mommy and the stepdad decided to borrow a car and drive to Ohio. Probably to score pills and weed. Maybe worse.The exhaust was loud and thecar stunk. The inspection stickerswere 2 yrs...
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Damn Lenny spoiling peace again.
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Hauntingly penned, Brenda. A powerful dark write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you for the love here it’s deeply appreciated ❤️
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My word, you really have entered into the spirit of this most hauntingly chilling time of year .. Bravo & likewise awarded the 🖤 of horror .. Kindest Regards, Neville 😎👍
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hello dearest Neville dark writing is a thing of mine I’m happy you enjoyed this…I always write what is on my mind I think it’s nightmares thank you for the great comment ❤️
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not only cool but my guilty pleasure .. 🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🖤🖤🐧😎👍
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lol I’m glad thank you ❤️
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that feels like it could be a win win .. ❤️
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Fia, you really need to study the lesson more thoroughly for a complete understanding.