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Read MoreThose mighty trees that spread their arms were once as tall as you. And none have felt the sweeping strokes of what a saw could do. Yet underneath those street-lined wings, resplendent in strong wood arise a row of rural homes where once their brothers stood. And...
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Thanks so much, Damian. :))
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This is awesome buddy! Great read and so true!
It’s amazing what all we can gather from a tree. From shelter to literally the air we breathe!
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Thank you so much Adelly. It’s always good to get your opinion and see your face on my page. 🙂
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Rush’s The Trees came to mind while reading this.
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I was lucky enough to see Rush 7 times. I believe they played the trees 2 times out those. Thanks for the comment.
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That’s pretty awesome. I did a whole Neil Peart tribute as part of the NaPoWriMo at DU back in 2021. That man was influential to musicians and writers.
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Read Morethey've adopted hateas the answer,excluding patiencethey've assignedvile languageas their positionthe drums of warornament speecheswith scornful accentsand so they'll march;they'll refute the enemythey'll interceptand reimbursewith unyielding blamethe lines are drawn;we've been here before.think the 60'sthink Kent stateand the violationof innocent...
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Powerfully penned, Tim. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Much appreciated back, my friend. Thank you.
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History repeating itself, only now we have phones to record everything and be shocked by the hatred many spew.
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Thanks very much.
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I didn’t say you were wrong, punk! The proper name is “Paint Horse”. I agreed! But there are some who call it painted horse too. So perhaps that’s a lesser name or something. I just go by what I research, I don’t judge.LOL.
You’re saying I’m wrong just to build the drama on a slow night.
Dont make me bring the BaBoom! on ya!
Anyway, lover, your write…
Wonderfully dreamlike, even if in day. That “zone” that we settle in, for creative moments. It’s addictive to want to stay there half a day!
You described it well. And my dear, we are immortal for as long as we are around! What a blessing! -
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I remember a certain dream you were telling me about today! Pillows were thrown! Hahaha
Yes, dreams can affect the awake state! I had to post!
And I am an avid dreamer honey. You know this too 🙂
Thank you for the snaps on my write!But honey you love my drama! Haha
You are a great sparring partner. It’s kind of addicting.
Your wit and words, I love it and you:)
Fixing to call ya in a bit. My iPad is fixing to die! -
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yeah, that dream. And also our last baboom. LOL. Sigh!
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Oh Lordy! Hahaha. Behave!!
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This is a good piece. If I can go to bed as well and just fall into a dreamlife. That would be great.
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Hi Fia!
Thank you. I’m so happy you enjoyed. I’ve always been curious about dreams. How our brains manage all of it while we are sleeping. Sometimes they feel so real and other times not so much. lol
It’s a great asset to be in tune with when it comes to writing. At least for me it is.
Thanks for stopping my Fia:). I’m not posting as much but I’m trying!
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Beautifully penned, Adel. Excellent write as usual my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hi Damien!
Thank you so much. I’m so happy you enjoyed it!
Thanks for stopping by amigo!
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We’re aware of painted horse and through family of riders riding them not just to battle, but to the here after and into the dream realm. Your guardian into and our of the dreamweaver or afterlife. Great pieces lady with lots of imagery, we could see this, tight
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Hey Meme!
I just felt like going there in this write. To kind of tap into the other side of sleeping. Dreams are fun. I don’t have many nightmares at all. Mostly weird stuff that makes me laugh when I wake up. Other times it is extraordinary and inspiring. I feel in order to be a writer we must dream. They go hand in hand.
Thanks for getting this write amigo. Glad you could see it.
That’s the whole point of writing for me:)
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This is a fiesta of dreamlife that ascends into cloud realms of loving bliss. I just felt the total joy here that comes as you rest your head to sleep and dream. This is how the best dreams come and you expressed this with great virtuosity. Truly a fabulous poem.
John
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Some of my favorite poems come from dreams. I’ve learned to keep a spiral notebook next to me in case something
Really grabs me and I need to write it down. Dreams have a huge influence on my writing:)
Thanks for all the positive feedback on my writes amigo:)
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Read Moremy focus is off no fascination can I findeyes dim of their flickerthey speak to the lostit is unintentional but my eyes find theirsalchemy of meditation, my medication toxicmy lucidity questionable, I have withdrawnwith nothing to hold my attentionsit...
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian ❤️
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Powerful vibes…
Most excellent…
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thank you graciously dearest Cipher I truly appreciate your presence here ❤️
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Tremendous work Brenda. Always a pleasure to read your poems..xo
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Cleverly penned, Tim. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian